Black Poetry : Eve & Howard (crossing over)

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    howard :

    not a date ...

    we're talking about practice

    not a lottery date

    with my soulmate ...

    we're talking about practice

    eve :

    but Howard, you're already a happy cactus

    why do you need me as your leading actress

    i've already got a guy carrying my mattress

    how can i think about marrying you when the fact is ...

    howard :

    hold it Eve, i'm only talking about a conversation or two

    you're under no elation to pursue a relationship

    that under his observation

    could have him wondering if he blundered

    into a situation

    where the vibrations

    of our thunder and lightning

    could have him tightning his wit

    to improve the fit of his Eve & 76er skit

    eve :

    but what about the stuff you've already written down

    about how you'd love to hit enough jumpers to erase my frowns

    and knit into my life all types of joyous sounds

    are you sure you're not just sitting with me to rebound

    admit it, you really don't need me around

    you're just looking for a bit of solid ground

    to stand on

    according to your standings

    you're more than capable of landing on your feet

    we've yet to reach our All-Star game and you've already got friendly dames

    handing you the keys to their suite

    [howard smiles]

    now that's what i'm talking about!!!!

    the next time we greet

    if we have a conversation that lasts this long

    that'll be more than enough to keep me singing happy songs

    to your heart


    howard!!!!!!!!! ..........


    this isn't over ...

    but despite herself Eve couldn't help but to wonder if Howard's art

    was true



    (to be continued)



    love,

    eve & howard
     
  2. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can just imagine all the creativity that is stirring about over there....the back and forth communication, the symbolism.....emotions.....Flow on Poet(s):)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think that Eve's interest in Howard is outside the realm of friendship... Hmmmmm...
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if only .... :10900:

    thanks watzinaname


    thanks platinumillity1 ;)
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think Eve wants more but is very skeptical if Howard is true and really knows what he wants. I love this!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yep Eve on a mission as Howard inters thy heart
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u are so smart, hee,hee,hee....

    as i will continue to read on...
    Desert Storm
     
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