Black Poetry : ETERNAL

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  1. free2b_me

    free2b_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Abyss of her woman-ness
    is uplifted
    By the Strength
    of his manly-ness
    within her deep
    abyss
    emotions kreep
    upon her surface

    Strange, this hold he has on her
    caressin her mind
    TENDERLY
    lovin her
    GENTLY
    DESIRE
    HER
    GREATLY
    This small world
    with room only
    :flirt:
    fit for 2
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sound like me and u .....lol
    this was awesome ya pen on fire
     
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    free2b_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :qqb018:AAAHHHHHHH.........
     
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    yes

    yes yes i'm really feeling ya

    the union between man and woman CANNOT BE MATCHED

    yes people try the mix and match thing but in reality

    NOTHING MATCHES THE UNION BETWEEN MAN AND WOMAN

    when both realize this is not a competition between them

    the world is easier to conquer

    peace
     
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    This is such a lovely flow. :great:
    It’s inspirational in truth

    Abyss

    The gap
    He so lovely resides
    She uplifts her sweetness
    Allowing him to go deeply
    Into the Abyss

    She gives out of love
    For the warmth in her heart
    Ceases to never subside

    Two being one
    Intertwined in a world
    Just for two

    Tells everything
    About both of them

    That this love
    They have is true

    Dare him never
    Hurts her deeply

    Enough to chase away
    Making them part no longer one
    The heart connection and mind

    Love lost
    Result is a crash
    Not one of perfect design

    Now he knows
    It’s hard to recapture

    Chasing after
    What he mistakenly took for granted

    He had it all
     
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    This kind of connection, cannot be improved upon, and the way you describe this eternal bond is just lovely.
     
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    free2b_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: THANXX SO MUCH FOR STOPPING BY EVERYONE AND ACKNOWLEDGE THE ABYSS OF MY WOMANESS.. LOL.. I KNOW THAT SOME MAY HAVE THOUGHT IS WAS ABOUT MAKING LOVE. BUT IT WASN'T, IT WAS ABOUT SHARING A CUP OF COFFEE AND CASUAL CONVERSATION! :em0300: LOL.. JUST KIDDING! BUT THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN FUNNY IF IT WERE! ;)
     
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    rain drops of beauty and truth...this poem read light as a feather, pure like ivory.
     
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    Beautiful!:great:

    Ahh how sweet it tis!:D

    :heart:
     
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    free2b_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SWEET APPLE, SISTA GURL,:hi: IT IS SO GOOD TO SEE YOU UP IN HERE! THANK YOU FOR STOPPIN BY AND SHOWIN ME SOME LOVE.....
     
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