Black Poetry : Eternal Soulmates

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  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don’t know the dates… or how it all begin.
    But in this lifetime came their joining.
    This lifetime gave their end.

    She was lost without a clue.
    Had kids… With what…
    She did not know what to do.

    Then there was He.
    Came with all her needs.
    Blessed her with 3 more seeds.
    And became the protector and provider of she.

    But this world holds no guarantees.
    And was sent forth to live their lives separately.
    Not truly knowing they are soulmates.
    Gods creation set to the date.

    Not a dollar short… or a day late.
    Not truly evolved around what their lives were worth.
    But the evidence of their fate.

    Mr. and Mrs. Taylor are… Soulmates.
    Blessed with all they procreate.
    A man honored by all the children he raised.
    A woman blessed despite the hardships of change.

    May their eternal joining be Glorious.
    May their offspring see such strength as Victorious.
    May they strive for the inevitable.
    May they seek their legacy to be obtainable.

    For they are SoulMates…
    Gods Creations…
    Set to the Dates.
    :bowdown:
     
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    This scribe takes a deep look at destiny and how natural it is when the fates meet. I enjoyed the way you conveyed this. Flow on poet.
     
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    Wow, this really hits me hard. There's this myth that soulmates are always together, but it's not true, is it. Emotive piece and tightly dropped. Nice to read you again, shaneak.
     
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    I found this to be very thought-provoking and I agree with Sister Gempis! It's a beautiful piece...but sorta scarey to think that even soul-mates can physically disconnect.

    Good piece Sister shaneak!

    Queenie :spinstar:
     
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    man

    a mate for the soul..aint nuthin like it :welldone:
     
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    soulfully tyte two as one ....mates
     
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    DSS: You have been in my thoughts brotha.. I hope all is well. Thanks for the comps... That was the first one i truly scribed on in almost a year. But was truly spiritually inspired. ;)

    watzinaname: Thanks... It was naturally written.. and from what i've seen... It was truly a spiritually natural experience..
    that i felt should be shared.. with all those willing to read it
     
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    Thank you Gempis: Its been a long time. (writing in general.. thoughts are there.. just not motivated to lay the black ink down on some white paper.) Actually i believe it is very true in spirit. Its the inner soul that yearns for such an attachment.

    NNQueen: It been a long time. Nice to see your in depth insight. But its not scary... Just consider that in death we all go back in spirit. And your soulmates job on the other side is to watch over you until that end. To keep your spirit safe from all the bad spirits that constantly reside around you and their attempts to bring you down. I guess you would have to consider the physical... which is basically in the flesh. I can only send you back to my 4th verse: God Bless.. and keep faith in Thee...
     
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    Nita: Thanks!! I"m glad you enjoyed the scribe!!!! I totally agree.

    Rich: My brotha!!! long time... Thanks a bunch!! I plan to come back and do some reading.. maybe get some other inspirations... I gotta start back somewhere ;) ....
     
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