Black Poetry : Eternal Song - epiphany and Bishop Collaboration

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bishop, Feb 25, 2002.

  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lying here at the twilight of my existence
    Knowing that this is our final moment
    No longer do I feel cheated by God
    For I have spent a thousand lifetimes with you
    My thoughts of our shared love
    Numbs the pain that racks my body
    Remembering our first kiss as man and wife
    Our first home
    First child
    We have never separated in all our years
    Yet by some design of fate
    This too will be a first
    I wipe the tear from your eye
    Baby don’t cry
    Our love shall continue
    Throughout all eternity
    I thank you for all that you have been
    For being there for me
    Through thick and thin
    And though I may have sometime
    Taken you for granted
    I never took our love for granted
    So here and now before
    I cross that river
    I sing to you a final song……….

    My Love....My heart
    as I wipe my tears...
    remember always
    the twilight of your existence
    is the just the beginning
    we promise til death do we part
    but not even death can steal
    the memories I have of you
    before God we vowed our love
    I was blessed to have found you
    I'm thankful each waking day
    you have given me security
    children created thru love
    forever satisfied......
    your heart became my home
    through good times and tears
    adversity, challenge and pain
    Our song is an eternal melody
    destine to surpass this time
    My love....
    this is an awakening
    not a passing without a trace
    do not fear the darkness
    in time the light will guide me
    to the heavens to unite once more

    ........with you
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Phiphany & Bish,

    Hella tight collab!!! I hear your song!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    applause applause applause
    i bowto the poets

    dssNY

    great duet
     
  4. blackfox

    blackfox Active Member MEMBER

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    heartfelt piece poets

    blackfox
     
  5. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoy reading and writing theses type of poems. This piece is very touching. I felt the emotion of every line.


    Thank you,

    Joyce
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bravo Poets.
     
  7. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful! :)

    Thank you for this...

    a
     
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    parting in the sorrowest of sorrows...

    'til tomorrow you wake...together once more.

    touching...but given the collaborators, we would expect no less.

    *let the river flow*
     
  9. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Evahbodee..
    appreciate the love....thanx 4 readin...

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  10. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop, appreciatin the opportunity to come
    together with a talented poet....thank you

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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