Black Poetry : Eternal Peace

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  1. naija-man

    naija-man Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Guns blasting, it's like a war ever lasting, :uzi:
    People cursing, lives ended mothers hurting,
    lives gone, lives lost,
    for wot price, for wot cost,

    Bullets flying, filling the sky,
    usually killing the one that wasn't willing to die,
    sadness, anger, :madd: confusion,:confused: revenge,
    but what's the point they've already taken your friend

    Finding the man, shooting the killer,
    won't make u a hero, won't make u bigger,
    your friend is gone, your friend is dead,
    all knowledge of happiness will be in your head,

    Forget about crying, forget your friend's passing,
    remember them happy, remember them laughing,
    u should be glad, a small bit at least,
    because now their resting, in eternal peace,

    So forget your troubles, forget your strife,
    just be happy and live your life,
    just be merry, and sing a happy tune,
    c'os one day you'll see your friend,.. really soon
    ©Naija-Man 2003
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was real right here man...
    and wise wordz to boot...
    keep drop'n pieces like this
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a wonderfully enlightened message.

    Much peace unto U, brother.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this was on point flow on
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes ya message...
    flow on...flava is good...:angel1:
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this Piece this it caught me today!..

    Oh before i forget :wave: Welcome


    Keep writing...






    Love L
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes we must set aside emotion
    and be logical...
    feeling the message
     
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