Black Poetry : eternal fling

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hi-wa, Jul 30, 2002.

  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i flirt with her every day
    when i know i need
    to "go'nangetserious"
    but i like the fact that
    our relationship is crisp and clean
    u know,............ a fling
    a thing to satisfy the temporary
    imagination
    occupation of lust,
    a robust dreamscape for a
    mind to play...........a fling
    to go all day (if need be)
    an "on-an-ontilthebrek'a'dawn" kinda thing
    that i can cheat on my spouse with and not
    feel guilty
    a fling that never comes and goes
    with the wind
    just sends my euphoria to the next level
    resulting in a break
    between man and life.........art
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nicely done poet!!
     
  3. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pre'ciate it RICH.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hiwa.


    heyyyyyy ga boi! :lol:

    you had me goin' for a minute... i mean... i
    thought you was talkin' 'bout me. but!
    alas... it was your art you was speakin' on.

    ...that's cool! i loved it anyway!! :D

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey now

    this was smoove dawg!!!!!!!




    One
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm glad i read this close to last.
    it deserves top space.

    pound for pound, dunn you're dat poet.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hiwa

    You are crazy talented bruh! Definitely a favorite!

    Reas
     
  8. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHEW! this was tight!
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love it! I love it! It is so easy to become entangled in the seductive web of art, whatever form. And so much so that can become our obsession and preoccupation...an all consuming love affair.

    blessed is the Poet/Artist who has an understanding mate.

    scribe on!

    alyce
     
  10. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok, ok. thanx to all the peeps that responded.
    i guess this struck a nerve to the word heads on the page.
    i wanna do the SO's now:

    SS: maybe it was u. you could embody art in my eye..............
    ZORB: gladudugit!
    J: i'm glad u read it at all. pree'ciate the upliftment. needed it this monin...
    REAS: pree'ciate it dog. thanx fa' readin a brotha...
    Story: glad u felt me....glad i could relate...
    sheryka: thanx...i'll try to make the next one great...
    Alyce: i always look forward to your words of inspiration. always on point, always on time...

    To all, b.e.z.

    hw
     
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