Black Poetry : Etermity

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Dec 1, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Through the words I write,
    I speak.
    The words I write,
    Reflects me.

    With every ear that hears,
    With every eye that sees,
    I will live,
    Eternally.

    With every stroke of my pen.
    There's a new sound
    What's lost within,
    I have found.

    In me,
    My creativity,
    My poetry,
    I shall live "Eternally"

    With every ear that hears,
    With every eye that sees,
    My creativity,
    My poetry,
    And I will live for "ETERNITY"
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so true as i am adsorb into the flow that the written verbs will be Eternal as the clocks ticks
    nice drop
    flow it poet
    Peace
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed.

    That's waht's so nice about it, U get 2 write what's on your mind & many people will read it.

    Some will agree, some will not, but that's the power of the written word.
     
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    Nice..........
    your gift, your flow within you see
    therefore it will live eternally ;)
     
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    this was profoundly smooth... :wink:
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ty all I thought this would in a way express my feelings of poetry and my work as well as the work of other poets. TY my family.
     
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    i missed this one...

    flow on poet of the week...
    i likes,,,
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something to ponder, isn't it, how powerful our words are.
     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ys, A we all know hee are times when "we" will write andtill ave a pofound effect on another... so through the worde we write we will live "ETERNALLY"
    TY my family.....