Black Poetry : ESTRANGED

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Estranged
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    Lovely daughters

    Bear my name

    Ashamed

    I've been

    Remiss

    Estranged

    In vain ~

    Brother

    Concede

    The blame

    Son realize

    Our dreadful fate

    A man defying state

    All the same you the man...

    Let us pray for reconciliation


    Darryl Abdu Omari :court:
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ copyright 2010
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    FANTASTIC!

    MARVELOUSLY said!

    And Amen! ----Yes, we need to call a "truce" and have some "Peace Talks" for ourselves and for our children.

    We've been "estranged" for far too long!

    We need to "fight the powers that be" instead of each other!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    as i bow unto you this was awesome bruh !!!
     
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    you write with so much truth I really dig this poem ...
     
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    Lord, give me wisdom enough to do what is right. :10500:
     
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