Black Poetry : Estate-Agent .......its cold

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  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There comes murkey mumbeling agent
    with a indisposed expression on his face
    looking at me as if i made a figment.
    Than shakes his head and says "its not youre fault""
    and cummutes the notice board "soled"" with big bleu printed words
    "For Sale "'
    I,m orphan again..
    My profound love wasn,t qualified and was tested on quantity..
    There is a querl in my soul and i dont know where i,m heading.
    as far as loverelationships..
    The loveflowers i send are pulverized
    with a few pieces of the leaves that i found in my colander
    i cover up my open soul.
    The flamingo is moulting her colours to grey.The cardiac hypertrophy
    didnt leave me a home.The licensee kept the door locked and left the building
    I,m out to the backcountry with my spirritual rucksack.I lay my head under the wisdom tree.O yes i meet so manny beautifull soulmates they come and go ?O yes i enjoy nice day,s nice things ,on this earth i could never be bored.
    There is so much to do and so not i will find things to do on this journey .If there is not a party i,m having one......and believe me i,m having real fun..
    i wont fake when i smile laugh or shine.
    This has nothing to do with not being happy
    and i dont care what some spirritual books are writting about happyness
    or giving me answers or enlightment ,yes mister Anthony de Mello ..
    I,m so Aware....
    This is how i feel now,
    i,m carving sad poetry on rocks during my grieve pitstops...
    and plukking myosotisses in the fields.
    Birds are singin ""when doves cry" notes..
    Remember i am a human..
    i have a heart
    i can be hurt..
    Lord is walking with me..
    but as far as on this earth..
    now...
    it feels ..
    i,m on my own again...




    brrrrr..

    brrr....
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinstar: :jawdrop: WOW, this was a very nice piece, Im diggen the style
    nice drop
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep and felt
    surely when u feel alone ya now
    look above
    and when u feel ya floating is when
    he's carring u
    awesome piece of art here
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, I really liked the analogy here, being locked out, forced into the cold. This was so well written.
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is deep!!! Wow, wow. It's gonna take me a minute to get over "cardiac hypertrophy." diggin it, AF.
     
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