Black Poetry : ESSENTIALLY UNSPOKEN

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  1. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The first time I kissed a perfect love was when you said hello and

    my soul labored and was transformed, tailored to fit

    you....you whose very form is

    the epitome of

    the word WOMAN....

    Open and free falling were eyes of free flowing honey with

    jasmine rhythms

    that danced to a staccatto tempo while taking the place of soft

    words unspoken essentially into the fabric of time....

    SILENCE IS.... now solemnly speaking as we exchanged sweet

    nothings in low tones that had many.... GOLDEN

    rewards secretly hidden in muted conversations that were laden

    with subtle innuendo...


    We spoke a language long lost and never heard before,but

    somehow we understood each and every

    vibration that was bringing ON and breaking OFF into deeper

    spiraling sessions of salacious offerings with each and every

    sound.... symphonic symetry synchronized.

    Beauty was yet struggling to try and understand how and why

    you could ever exsist without ever asking its permission....none

    needed....PERMISSION GRANTED.

    Who dared write this beautiful song that IS you?

    Who could ever sing it?

    Ten million tongues?

    Ten million and one voices?



    I am PAUSED and my SOUL is interrupted by you.

    Fast forward to frenetic frenzied foreplay.

    Can you hear me singing?



    Listen close.....closer.....closely.

    LOVE

    times

    EMOTION

    equals

    PASSIONS

    explosion!!!


    We

    are

    EVOLUTION ESSENTIALLY UNSPOKEN.

    Do you understand?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    woooooooooweeeeeeeee sho nuff heard dis clear
    and surely everyone else will tooooooo
    a true masterpiece flow on POET !
     
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    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    definitely the work of a true poet!
    :hot:
    I felt the explosion all the way
    down here!
     
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    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I understand bruh....nicely said!!!! slight pun intended.
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah i understand and i'm flowing right now. lol. please give us more
     
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    I hear you calling…softly upon each word you spill
    So I now submerge and swim…and yes I understand


    The first time love returned my kiss it lingered in my hello,

    Searing straight to my soul and I was filled …

    You whose very structure is the quintessence of what a “MAN” should be

    Intriguing and Captivating, you are…as your words flow

    washing over my essence absorbing into my distance…

    As a mistral traveler did our “moment” soar through

    time warps of inevitable to ensure that we would “be”…

    That blessed day, permission was granted…

    beauty no longer needed / as now (you & I ) exist

    Match made and sealed with love in heaven

    The lost language now found

    You, me, I………….

    Evolution, Essentially…WE



    Nuestras almas para siempre unido, Para Siempre…
     
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    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich,Blaque, 007,True......Thanks for the love!!lol

    It seems my stuff isn't enjoyed unless it's by the select deep crowd.

    Oh well, I guess I've gotta work harder to become the true poet I think I have inside me,huh? lol


    Sage- WOW!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U are more then worthy and it's enjoyed more then u know
    u are a true poet ......it takes a poet to know a poet
    i see a poet
    flow on bring the poetic vibe
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reeeeeeeewind.............no problem

    glad I was able to grace the page with a poet as "Great as yourself"!
     
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    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich/Sage-

    I'm truly dumbfounded and honored to have you give me love like this and as you always have.

    Thank you.
     
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