Black Poetry : Essence of a woman pt 2

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  1. Aprofoundman

    Aprofoundman Active Member MEMBER

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    A pattern makes up a woman.
    To me a womanist is strong willed.
    In addition to being a woman, she has soul.
    A lady who believes in herself has courage.
    Being articulate signifies her tone when she speaks. When dressing
    conservative taking pride in herself means that she exudes a
    confidence unlike any the world has ever seen.
    She walks graciously with a commanding presence that only a
    perceptive man can see. Her finesse is professional
    like a resume that is carefully being reviewed.
    As referring to being an essence of a woman she knows who she is inside. Portraying her
    full self like a real woman should goes to show that she respects
    herself. In times of trouble, she is nurturing, her
    strength in hard times calms the spirit and soothes the soul. Her
    stride is silent like a drop of a pin.
    A woman is
    the epitome of beginings and givers of life.
    Having value and morals is important
    when being a well rounded woman.
    Their skin tone is beautiful like a dove.
    Looking splendid
    from head to toe is the meaning of well groomed.
    Perseverance pushes a lady to be who she is in
    this present time. She who has endurance has patience.
    Without saying a word she's quiet and reserved.
    Understanding is a priceless quality. Does this describe your essence?
    Would you consider yourself to be unique in your own way?
    What makes you original?
    An essence of a woman is all around.
    Sincerely,
    yours
    Derick Bryant
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u really bringing it tyte pt.3 sweet release please
    tyte
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A woman's essence has a sense of self, and there's pride in that. I'm enjoying this write.
     
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    my goodness
    just wonderful
    flow on indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Very Nice Aprofound

    I like your flow very much and I know where your going with it. Very good flow here and I totally agree. Thanks for sharing. I wrote simular things back in 2000 when i first starting writing. I think I posted it here on the site. Here is what I wrote. You know of what you speak. Great flow.

    WOMAN...WISE...a woman is the glue and adhesive in a
    relationship. She holds the key. A man can't have a
    relationship with a woman. She has to accept or allow it.
    She is charged with holding the relationship together.
    Allowing or working with her mate to build and
    assemble a loving relationship or family.
    A woman has tenderness. A man needs this.
    A woman is refined... polite and has
    ELEGANCE..a refinement and grace in movement...
    (walks and stands in a sexy way ) a woman has inner
    beauty which will always over ride her outward appearance
    and manner. If her heart is dark and cold..it will
    be seen by those who have the sight.
    Her inner beauty some people can't explain they
    just want to be around her, and help her anyway they can.

    This is because a woman has
    OPULENCE... Great Wealth.. this is how she can
    influence or inspire people.. She can make a man
    feel he can do anything if he can do it for her, or
    assist her in doing something.
    AFFLUENT... abundant resources of inner wealth.. an
    effect or quality of life that can flow into another.
    A wealth and beauty she can share.
    COPIOUS.. never ending source of love.
    A FULLNESS... more mature than man, totally qualified,
    accepted, and empowered with what a man really needs.
    A woman has depth and is complete.
    To you I give what I know is true, will you give what
    you have to me?

    Only a woman can bring out what a man needs.
     
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