Black Poetry : especially...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Nov 15, 2002.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l love all people
    but l love you especially.
    so when i say "l'm in love with you" l doesn't mean infatuation or
    a moment's gratification

    i mean--
    you all withstanding the test of times
    we must have been anchored in the forms of sister/brother
    friend/lover
    needless to say there shall not be another, ever,
    for you are my final destiny
    i'm glad i met you and we met we...

    l care for all people
    but i care for especially
    so when i say "i care for you" it doesn't mean my being present
    or checking to see if everything is o.k

    i mean--
    me being on a 24 hours a day 365 days a week
    whatever minutes & seconds watch for you
    body mind spirit and soul
    assuring to myself that my girl is under God's control and protection..
    i care for your goal. i care for your dreams. i care for your direction
    my life...

    there's always that extra wind that's meant for only you to feel...
    there's always that extra light for you to see clearer
    extra miles i would travel for you, with you, to you...

    this is my love and care- i don't fear
    we shall go where others wouldn't dare,
    Virginia.

    my queen y'all.. none like you.
    love especially.
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    J'hiah you are such a wonderful guy :love:

    but my name aint Virginia :censored:

    hehehe ... for real Sweetie ... this is beautiful :)

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx Destee.
     
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    This is one to warm a woman's heart. Very devoted piece. Wonderful read. Lucky girl Virginia is.
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a blessed man i am.

    thanx Gaylee.

    next dedicated piece called ' and it was so '
    (my marriage banner in about a couple of years) :wink:

    :thanks: nfinite....
    don of poets.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man just love ........dis on hit !
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww...how adorable :)

    (jus don't tell her you been cheatin with me...hehe ;) )

    2fish
    1 :heart: infinitely
     
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    Shani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful, beautiful, beautiful...

    ~Shani :)
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovely, sweet sentiments...
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    being in love most definitely agrees with you...this is sweet, sweet, sweet..

    K
     
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