Black Poetry : Escaped Feel'ns(Inspired by $$RICH$$'s poem)

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My mind about to blow,
    as I moped around feel'n low.
    Repeatedly rewind'n, paus'n,
    our relationship in my head,
    try'n to locate where
    your feel'ns escaped.
    Almost to the point of los'n
    my gait, I felt faint
    as I beat up my heart
    think'n I was at fault.
    Obsess with why!
    you pulled the trigger
    of the gun that discharged
    a bullet which broke
    my heart and
    caused the stains on my cheeks
    from the continuous flow of tears
    that puddled at my feet.

    copyright2001cju
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Coco

    you bringing it heavy girl
    had to hit you


    >DSS<
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ahhhhh!!!! COCO

    U POSE PT.#2 OF MY INNER THOUGHTS
    U LAID IT DOWN LIKE I FELT U WOULD
    TRUELY ITS THE WAY OF LIFE WE LIVE
    OUR HEARTS ALWAYZ BEING STOLEN
    YET WE FINE PEACE IN THE END......:kiss: :heart:
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good flow Coco!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Fellas

    Hey! So'ja. It's always nice to see you read me.

    $$RICHIE$RICH$$, You know I Feel ya;)

    Thanks for the read GQ

    MadLove:heart: ta muh chocolate fellas.

    mmmmmm doesn't that sound like a delicious candy bar(Chocolate Fella)? I'd buy it.

    Ok, I quit. It's late or early and I'm high off of silence. uhm.....that's what I get for taking an early evening nap.:D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    IT'S SMOOTHLY CREAMY CHOCOLATE

    GO HEAD COCO FLOW YA MIND
    AS I SEE WHATS INSIDE......:D