Black Poetry : Escape

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Jan 31, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    Within da night calls
    Your love reach upon my soul

    Escape
    Exhale upon the air
    And feel the breeze
    Soul so warm heart
    Cant breath
    fly thru the air…
    A storm just landed
    soul rocks..
    whisper in the night…
    time stop
    as the earth begins to spin
    and shakes….
    Within is love able to release
    Fires burn and I don’t
    know where this is goin…
    scream
    scream
    Tears down inside and
    floatin as they begin to boil
    the fire is high
    desires rise
    and fear cries
    Eyez closed and then open…
    Power within…drain only to cover
    the soul and release the pain
    The force plans to grab hold
    And rapture the being insanely
    The eyez pour
    The moment captured
    Escape
    Escape
    Exhale upon the air
    And feel the breeze
    Tears run
    Fears gone
    Near but far
    Bodies lay
    Interlace in the spirit
    Holdin on to the mind……
    Surf the past
    enhance the present
    for the future is comin……
    Escape
    Quiet whispers reach the soul
    One givin unto another
    Foldin into one……
    Exhale……

    Peace Angel
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    very nice flow sistah feeling ya on this too
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    thank you rich..glad ya can feel me on dis
    peace
     
  4. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2003
    Messages:
    10,784
    Likes Received:
    4,235
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +4,472
    this is a refreshing piece
    escapism...i feel you
    one love
    khasm
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    thankz for da love
    and support
    peace
    Angel
     
  6. SkinDeep

    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 10, 2003
    Messages:
    126
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    i like the way you wrote this.
    i like it alot.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    SkinDeep.. thanks glad ya likes
    Peace
    Angel
     
Loading...