Black Poetry : ...erotically thinking. (garrison's response evolving)

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  1. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it’s hard sometimes…
    thinking about being in love
    without considering how
    pleasurable it would be
    feeling you… on/in me…
    with me flowing underneath
    you… with us two moving
    in perfect sync… to a groove
    as intrinsic & uninhibited
    as an afrikan tribal dance…

    (& in my musings we
    do get “natural” like that)

    you be… mischievously…
    tugging on nappy hair
    …deliberately ripping pretty
    underwear… audaciously
    bending me(over) to your will
    …shamelessly kissing &
    licking on everything…
    leaving no doubt in my mind
    about just how low you’re
    willing to go to please me…
    & it’s at this time that i
    feel inclined to let you know…
    (in-between shallow breaths)
    that payback is indeed a *****
    & i got next…

    i be… possessively…
    cradling you between blak
    thighs… repeatedly
    calling on the MostHigh…
    defiantly trying not to cry(out)
    …‘cause big gyrls don’t do
    that ****… & besides…
    i can’t have you erroneously
    assuming i want you to stop…
    …at least not ‘til we Both
    get enuff… or get lifted…
    …or get tired & fall asleep
    or until i wake from ruminating
    to make this poem a reality…

    …whichever comes first.


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  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OK...I will keep my mouth shut on this one here.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this izzzzzzzzzzzzzz hot!!! you gone make a brother wanna get nasteeeeeee!!! but no joke, this is magnificent...

    verb
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see u bout to make me get extreme
    gurl u laid it out sweet
     
  5. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow elayne.
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm always amazed

    i really love your work

    i really really do

    everything u write blows all my stuff away

    amazing
     
  7. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love comes in many forms Kemestry.

    We need more than one judge. :rolleyes:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    erotically yours...coz, like the rest, i love that thing you do.

    ives
     
  9. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No the rule is the rule, but she is covered!

    Well theoretically this is a love poem...cause y'all know you would LOVE someone to do this to you! hahahahahaha....However I am with Kem, we said these were all to be Love Poems as in Romantic literature and there is a difference...but as usual Sista girl can do anything she likes whenever she likes ...WHY?...cause she got it like that!


    Blessings House!
     
  10. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well rules or not I liked it and it was a love

    poem. love don't have to be mushy. This is grown up love. and i on't memba nothing about it had to be mushy, u just said the mushier the better........







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