Black Poetry : Erotic Treats

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by naujae, Nov 22, 2004.

  1. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come in my room of erotic treats
    making love to every man i mets
    stop by the store to get the things i need
    to make my lovers feel loved and pleased
    make a fruit salad and maybe a dildo
    a little touch of honey don't you know
    in the bed as you're inside of me feeling
    your penatration, the rolling of the eyes in the back of my head
    as I almost fall off the bed
    don't try to excape just explore what next
    while I get my lovers to their climax.
    got you hypmotize as you fall to your knees
    tryin to find out why the fruit salad is needed
    pineapple the one with a hole so i can put it on you d**k
    every stroke I take a bit and a lick
    a piece of a grape on your navel
    I grap it with my tongue
    Your callin Naujae as I'm callin THEONE
    bringing the freak out of the both of us
    huffing and puffing in the heat of the lust
    as you put your stick between my bust
    up and down with motion
    as I bring out the baby lotion
    Rub it all over me silky smooth
    feeling it Rich and cool
    am I a whore only the words from hodee knows
    when I get him to his desnity he's callin me hoes
    it don't bother me because it's not true
    as tha hookupman come in and do what he do
    gentle he touch me in all the right spot with a touch of cream flow in my mouth as I swallow he's yellin watzinthename
    as she try to show me her game
    I take her to a whole different level from making love to erotic bliss
    do what i do with to every spot of your body
    back for second because i'm a hotty
    havin 'em sweatin
    cuz of course it turn me on
    with equrie mind they want to know
    How I go on and on
    it's my hobby that I found that I'm good with it
    makin men cum while I'm tastin it
    you can call me a chickenhead and shimps
    but this chickenhead don't need a pimp
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thinking: :thinking:
    I here ya NAuJe
    Very descriptive, creative drop
    diggin the way you posed this peice
     
  3. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got Ya! creative, like the way you put in the names to fit in the poem...
    feelin it, keep writing nauj!
     
  4. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you 4 the props.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa like a heatwave this was very sweetly yummy
    beware of da bliss ...............................................
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Didn't expect to see my name in the mix, but there it is. Makes me wonder where I'll show up next? And honestly, I'd rather not appear in another one of your threads in this manner. Thanking you in advance.
     
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    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :slobber: More I savor 4 more of your writting. Next time u can use yo girl Ebony Queen ;)
     
  8. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname- sorry if this bother you its just writing pls. don't take it personal I don't go that way. Your suppose to have people thinking and that what I did but again I'm sorry and will not you your name in a poem such as this (friends) :eek:oops:

    Ebony Queen - Thank you and i'll make such i'll use your name in one of my poetry.

    Rich- Thank you very much got to keep my game smooth like lotion and my poetry tyte
     
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