Black Poetry : Erotic Night

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She walks in
    My eyes are stalkin
    Her hips
    Those lips
    Her thighs
    Dazed my eyes
    Shes moving
    Grooving
    Shaking her backside
    Making me slide
    Off my seat
    To the dance floor
    We romance more
    Close to me
    No space in between
    Perfume enters my nose
    Sweet smellin, penetrates my clothes
    Sweating, its hot, she’s hot
    Movin to the beat, blowin up the spot
    No one else exists
    Only us and this
    Beat
    My nights complete
    Thought I’d chill til she crashed this piece
    Lickin her lips
    Beggin for a kiss
    Won’t invade her space tho
    She’s sexy, but I’ll take it slow
    Free spirit and exotic nature
    Gotta taste her
    Figure out her flava
    Just to touch her once, I’d give her all my papa
    She’s got it, she knows it
    Knows I want it, that’s why she’s showin it
    Starin me down, I won’t turn my cheek
    Don’t know her name yet, didn’t get the chance to speak
    Dark skin, shinin
    Blinging and blindin
    As we’re bumpin n grinding
    Let her hair down, she’s unwindin
    3 songs went by, we’re getting down
    Time don’t matter now
    I could move with her til dawn
    Legs goin crazy, mind completely gone
    People wanna cut in but not happenin
    Shorty got it all, what an attraction
    Thick, I don’t like that skinny ish
    Showin skin, but not stuck in that mini ish
    Classy
    A queen if you ask me
    Not payin attention to the others that pass me
    Makin me horny tha way we dancing nasty
    Spinnin n dippin
    Hands slippin
    She don’t mind tho
    Tryna keep composure but she fine tho
    Not thinking, just acting
    Dark room, lights flashin
    Fourth song is passin
    Surprised my legs aren’t crampin
    She backs up, uses one finger
    Tells me to come closer, so I linger
    Her way, she smiles
    Chasin- normally not my style
    She grabs my neck
    We connect
    Closes her eyelids
    I’m gone, it’s hard to fight this
    We’re one
    Serious but having fun
    My hands roam her back
    More curves than a race track
    So sexual
    Song seems perpetual
    End of sixth song, she takes my hand
    ****…
    Leads me to the booth, fast romance
    Pushes me back and gives a lap dance
    Here’s my chance…
    Fingers touchin inside the shirt
    Squeezing, rubbin, feels so right it hurts
    She’s workin it with her legs wrapped around me
    I’m so glad she found me
    She’s touchin herself, puts her finger to her mouth
    Licks it, puts it to my lips, still haven’t made a sound
    Very flirtacious
    A night like this-only Hollywood makes this
    But its reality, in the flesh
    Now she’s getting closer to my neck
    Ran her tongue across it
    Moved to my ear and I lost it
    My hands are all over her, still movin to the rhythm
    People all into this show we’re givin em
    But I don’t care
    I know it’s not fair
    Moves to my face
    Totally embraced
    Thought she was gonna kiss me
    Moved in but missed me
    Jumps off my lap, sits back
    And says…
    So whats your name?
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww **** GIRL!!!! this endin' had me surprised!! this poem is HOT! had me captivated the whole time...
    whew! i think i need a fan...its a lil hot in here....
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol i told u! i told u! but thank u. But tha funny thing is sumthin kinda like this happened to me. it was weird as hell... lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe .............a heated bliss
     
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    thank u $$Rich$$
     
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    What a flow, this captured the mental canvas, fa sho...poeticlyspeakin this was just spilling down the page in a tyte rage of maad skill. Great read!
     
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    wow..this is so so smooth..yes it is hot..wonderful Peace
     
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    All of the above, this was high-definition TV, TLC, FOX TV, etc!
     
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    OH MY GOD! THIS POEM WAS OF THE HOOK! HAD ME STUCK FROM THE BEGINING TO THE END!
     
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    lol thank you Rico, Bluewater, 1poetsought, and agelicsage.
     
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