Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, May 28, 2001.
Alyce. Hunter. N2. Afri. Zorbshun. $$RICH$$. Verb.
i called your names because you guys have shown
Extra concern for me in my absence. Thank You...
I appreciate You... & I also MISS you!
i'm always close by... i'm ALWAYS writing... i'm just
taking a moment. trying to gain some balance & control
of the "things" in my world. i haven't left home... i'm
just staying in my room for a while...
don't worry 'bout me!! if i need you guys... i know
what to do! & where to come...
That's what I'm talking about, sis. This piece is so expressive; its amazing how you worked those verbs. I'm definitely showing mama this one. Go ahead and keep me scribbling those notes, sis...
Sunshyne ... this is a classic !!!
i think in every life this point is reached
but not every life is able to articulate it
paint it ... stroke it ... know it and
acknowledge it ... in such a remarkable way
you are gifted
I am smiling! Thank you for sharing your soul today. I will be the one tip-toeing down the hall (on my way to the kitchen), careful to respect the 'do not disturb' sign hanging on your door.
Much love for you lil sis,
we all need...
a moment to breathe
to renew our faith in life
and all those we know are there for us
but struggles and distrust
take their toll on us
so we go into our room
close the door
exhale lil sistah.
rest in HE who giveth love, peace, the sereneness of usefulness that gets us through this moment of test.
thanks for this.
I am now comforted to know that you are only taking self inventory and not in need of help so to speak. So like the rest of the family I too shall tip toe past ya room on my way to the kitchen making sure they left you a glass of "RED" koolaid. Good to see ya sis.
y am I not surprised!
by the utter genius this poem brings forth!!!
and it can't be said enuff--
AS LONG AS U R IN THE HOUSE
I'M HAPPY AND THE ONE IN THE
NEXT ROOM SINGING LOW SWEET AND SOFT
SO I DO NOT DISTURB YO SPACE TO FINE SELF
IN THE MIDDLE
I MISS U AND LOVE U
HOPE TO SEE U WALKING THE HALLS SOON
U R A BRIGHT LIGHT IN MY HEART
Smiling at the Shyne~
Girl, whateva kind of koolaid you drinkin' to help ya' equilibrium become well-balanced, I'd like to have! This piece is synergetically tight!! I see GA workin' the proses outside of the box ~~ bring em' out, bring em' out sista!!
On the real though, madd respect for you taking your time to work on some of the things in your life, and do understand why those things may need your attention at this point. Just know that your words are missed. Glad to have a piece of GA back on the scene though... you see we all attacked the poem hitting it up with our replies of love!!
Thanks GA for making the Sunshyne a little brighter in the midwest today!!
One luv sustah-girl!!
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