Black Poetry : Equilibristic Equinox

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Jul 24, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something wicked this way comes

    Trying to void my sphere of being

    Attempting to upset my celestial

    ~B~~~~~ ~L ~~~~~~N~~~~~~E

    ~~~~A~~~~~~A~~~~~~C

    Brightest colors pulsate through

    my watercourse rain in time

    Floodgates open to heavenly

    d
    o
    w
    npours

    showering my

    O
    equinoctial circle

    Equiponderance

    of my

    E~q~U~i~L~i~B~r~I~u~M

    has me

    planethopping and staring

    through the

    cosmos where I moon”run”

    in my mind

    Mastering horizontal flips

    &

    V
    e
    r
    t
    i
    c
    a
    L

    leaps of

    galactic pursuit

    of

    space and time

    Just a chance to

    BLAST OFF

    into my existence

    Visiting Mars on

    illuminated stars

    within this

    solar system

    Bringing reality

    to this thing called

    SOLIPSISM
     
  2. MapleXtract

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    Since...

    ...I, myself, have been
    in such an astronomical
    mood, lately, I've been
    brought back
    in(out)to space, by this
    all-too-vivid univers(e)al
    flow, created by who else, but
    my favoritest flirt.
    *seeing stars*...
    :spinstar::star::spinstar::star:
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    Cosmically Gifted ~ you are... :wink:

    Love this in ya' Boo ~~!


    Miss readin' ya'! :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GOT ME IN

    DA GALLAXY OF MANY SHOOTING STARS
    WELL DONE POET:toast:
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    GQ

    the stars are shining on this dun

    Peace

    DSS
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    geeq, well, okay, i'm lost wit tryin' to find...uhmmm, well, uhmm, the right words for this tyght piece. so just let me tell you that, i'm lovin' it! now, i'll leave it at that.
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee-Que....


    you always seem to leave me... cosmically entranced! :)

    :heart:.
    BlakGurl.:)
     
  8. Hunter

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    Gentleman of Quality Indeed!!!

    Such a beautiful flow poet...I loved the way you tamed the horizontal lines on the page.....so so....creative...inter-galactically
    scribed

    *outer-space*
     
  9. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bro....

    you've outdone yourself here blakman...this is...CLASSIC...like shell toe adidas classic, naw, Chuck Taylor Converse classic....basically this is magnificent.

    "10" (big) (man, how in the heck you get those big ole numbers and letters?)

    blak
     
  10. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks poets for the read...all are much too kind!!!!

    Someone tried (unsuccessfully I might add) to wash the ring around my Saturn - thus this EE passage was inked. :cool:

    Peace
    GQ
     
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