Quiet Poetry Lounge : EPIPHANY

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CreativeExpress, Jun 10, 2004.

  1. CreativeExpress

    CreativeExpress Active Member MEMBER

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    It's clear, I see
    the farthest parts of me
    Engage in my physche
    See my spirituality

    I am the soul star
    that shimmers and glows
    What I bring to the masses
    you envision, but do not know

    I am that swirling darkness
    that hypnotizes your mind
    Brings you to my wonderment
    But me, you don't find

    You don't have to question me
    take a glance at my epiphany
    Come on love
    walk with me
    On starbursts
    that dance free-flowingly

    Does my forwardness
    capture you
    and you go through my motions

    My moonbeams
    of majesty
    melts into you
    like love potions

    You don't have to be with me
    to make love to my epiphany
    Come on, precious lover, you
    don't ask me if you can
    just do

    And when you start to think
    that from my rivers you can drink
    and fill up
    your sweet cup
    With the tastiness of me

    That's when I will see
    that you have come to be
    one with me
    and we are the
    Epiphany...
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To have another see deep into your soul and know it's love to the utmost, such a concept. This was just lovely.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done here poet flow on wit da epiphany !
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm with watzinaname - great concept and beautifully laid out. Wow
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This has a smooth rhythm that
    flowed effortlessly from beginning to end!
    Very nice...
     
  6. Bluewater

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    oh yes
    i have indeed
    sip of your flow
    it tis so devine
    lovely drop
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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