Black Poetry : Epiphany

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  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a nice lil flow i just wrote....
    yall tell me what yall think....

    As you
    Slowly feed me
    the fruits of your body
    you guide me on down
    to the sins of lust and adultery
    Fornication is our property
    As I let you guide me
    Down the road of intimacy
    I realize I have no regrets.
    You have made my mind and body
    soaking wet
    And yet
    Your touch instills fear in me
    Because the way you love me
    Is powerful, like the waves of the sea
    I can feel you inside of me
    Physically and spiritually.
    This experience,
    regardless of how many times repeated,
    is unique
    simply because it involves you and me.
    You touch me gently
    And sweep me off my feet
    Slowly but surely
    I fall for you, oh so deep.

    Your touch is firm yet gentle
    The games we play are simple mental
    Yet everything you say
    Increases the mind play
    Until you finally have it your way.
    Your kisses are as soft
    As the breeze on your face.
    Just looking at you
    Can take my breath away.
    I am charmed by your grace.
    You're as beautiful as Nefertiti
    You are one of the few
    women who is truly
    a nubian queen.
    And this bond that we share
    is a truly divine epiphany.

    :love:
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful! Felt this...
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is nice PlayWitItPimp05 wonderful
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    epip always flow nicely
    u let it scribe so well
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaay PlayWitItPimp05 :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    i know you've been here a minute but i don't think i've welcomed you, so i had to do that first ... :) ... now ... beautiful poetry! thank you for sharing this peace. We have a Sister named Epiphany though i've not seen her on the forum lately ...

    Great Work :toast:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  6. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww!!!
    I appreciate all of the love...
    Thank you guys!!!
    And thanks for that special welcome Destee!!!


    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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