Black Poetry : Epiphany / HODEE Collaboration

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Epiphany.. Dear heart
    Flow with me


    Dear heart this no ordinary day

    From a distant place
    I met a love
    She spoke
    That love is you

    There was a conquest
    A love take over
    I am captured

    No do not struggle dear mind,
    The heart she captured is mine
    I surrender wholeheartedly

    I have been longing for this
    A divine moment to come
    Your heart and words have me won

    Soul deep is how you speak
    Always mellow
    Whispers they run deep

    Like a day spent in the sun
    On a picnic just for one
    Invite me to partake in your feast

    A woman like you
    To calm the things I go thru

    I look at you
    I am reminded to give back
    Love isn’t love until it’s given away
    I am willing to give
    As much or even more than I get

    Love in the physical

    To you every day,
    From my heart to your heart
    Expressed in many ways

    I will deliver to you
    In a thousand ways

    In a touch holding hands,
    In a glance

    If it seems that I cherish
    It may be that your love it does nourish
    The best parts you bring out of me

    I will deliver in a kiss
    Be by your side never trip
    You’re my heaven
    And the one that I do miss

    I will deliver a smile
    As we both laugh driving by
    One of our favorite places we found

    In my call to your home
    When I am away you are not alone
    So don’t be afraid
    Of the skies or the storms

    I will rush thru the rain
    To be by your side
    In this life

    Take this to the place
    You have in your mind

    I will make love in words to you
    Every day to you on the phone

    You will read my love when
    I send letters to you
    Little notes left all around

    The attraction I feel its essential
    I want it to be
    With you continuously

    Hold me tight
    Wrapped in love,
    With you
    In your life

    My love is for real
    I know because I feel
    I can express
    In my heart and in my head

    If it’s possible to write it
    It can be said

    You’re Love
    Our Love
    Some one to love

    Passionate

    This was no ordinary day
    Dream is not over yet

    For there is you
    The things you do

    The love, ardor and the passions of you
    To me you emit excitement like light
    An excitement glowing so bright
    A radiance beaming from you

    The way you express
    The things of your heart
    You bring into being
    The best of me

    I love what you see thru your eyes
    It is conveyed by you

    No disguise

    When I am conversing with you
    I am present with a dream

    This is love so deep
    The comfort in your eyes and your smile
    Ease my mind

    You question the right things
    You are delivering a dream

    I want to be the one
    The one I want you to hold
    My hands holding yours
    The light in you envelopes me
     
  2. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll have to get my creative juices flowing to do this
    beautiful expression justice.....very nice, Hodee. :welldone:

    I'll certainly return....soon.


    epiphany:heart:
     
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  3. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From a place of distance
    I met a gentle man
    he spoke of love
    most rare and true

    as a moth to a flame
    I was captured
    upon your request
    hypnotized by your charm
    carried away in bliss

    there is no struggle
    my mind is at ease
    I too, surrender
    giving you all of me

    I have yearn for a love
    sent from divinity's perch
    blessed and chosen
    you came with a smile
    offering comfort
    within the warmth of your embrace

    my words are a reflection
    that runs soul deep
    my heart's desire
    whispers of what you are to me

    come, we will share
    quiet conversations in the park
    partake of each other
    among the flowing willow trees
    feasting on fruit
    under the sun's radiant gleam

    A man like you
    to protect & cherish me
    ease the rising tides of life
    that threatens the peace I seek

    I look at you
    I see the light of day
    I'm reminded why I fell in love
    you took away the rain
    bestow on me your honesty
    the presence of a real man

    love in the physical

    is like heaven on earth
    the bursting of clouds
    a sensual, torrential rainfall
    your heart to my heart
    the birth of a splendid thing

    I will deliver to you
    in a thousand ways
    the fullness of my spirit
    the gentleness of my touch
    the courage when you falter
    the support when times are tough

    if it seems that I may cherish
    my life in circumference to you
    it is because my life began
    the moment you said
    " I love you"

    I will deliver to you a kiss
    to steal away the pain of the past

    bestow on you a smile
    to brighten your most darkest days

    I can go on forever
    the joy you invite in my life
    the promises, the hope
    a shelter from the storms
    the wind beneath my wings
    with you
    my skies are blue
    even in my most solemn of moods

    in my moments of longing
    I know you are near
    with a call, or romantic notes
    I believe in us
    I know this is real
    a forever in a lifetime
    I'm ready to spend with you

    Your Love
    Our Love
    One love


    I vow to you fidelity
    a love without disguises
    your guiding light of serenity
    in our own romantic dream
    I will always ignite the passion inside you
    as long as we both shall live



    epiphany
    :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now dat was aweosme y'all had me spinning in waves of something sweet...
    love this collab.....
     
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  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You two...

    have absolutely done the dang love thang with this collaboration!

    Great flow!


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    Hmmmmm...hodee & epiphany collab huh...
    now I see why epiphany gets kisses. (hehehe):)

    Ok..I'ma stop.

    But fa real though...if yall aint diggn on each other.
    Yall should be..... because this joint is ALL THAT!!!!
    Hodee you are 2 adorable and epiphany....you know
    I luv to read anything you pen. This was really beautiful.


    Much Luv
     
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  7. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx, $Rich$

    I'm happy you were feelin the waves of sweetness,
    love poetry does that...you know. Especially if you're a romantic.

    Which I'm bettin you are....:qqb015:

    ~~~~~~~~~

    Thanx Coco, playing off of a poet who loves...to write about love,
    made it easy for me. Since I love to write about love, too.

    Hodee, you did the dang love thang....

    ~~~~~~~~~

    Stoooooooop..... :em2900:lol.

    He gave you kisses...too. :lol:

    Just two poets who understand what it means to truly love
    someone with all your heart and then express it in written form.
    And you know, kindred spirits think alike.

    I agree, 4everluv, he is an adorable man and a great poet.

    ~~~~~~~~~

    Hodee, It was my pleasure crossing pens with you, thank you.



    epiphany:heart:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you wouldn't mine if i just

    sat back and admired from a distance?

    great poetry poets

    feeling ya here
     
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    suga sweet sandwiched soliloquies...
    very nice the both of u...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    The ebb and flow...the give and take...Hodee's words just calling to epiphany's to grace the page in a like feathery manner...which she did. Just beautiful you two, just beautiful.
     
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