Black Poetry : epic moments??

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  1. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sme
    epic
    moments
    were seeing the
    devistation
    of the 'white devil'
    etch'd across yo face.
    u hardly
    recognize ME,
    but u
    recognize the pusha.
    it was
    grief watchin
    him on the corner of Lexington
    and 59th
    peddle his beautiful
    blk musculature
    to any and everyone
    for a quick
    buck.
    u ought to know
    that we shd be better than that; we
    shd rise with tha
    sun kissin ou'r
    feet we
    gotta have
    each otha like God
    has us by the
    heels...
    epic moments were
    feelin the
    stab of foolishness
    for f*&9in a
    neegroe,
    revenge fo gettin
    in a relationship with him...instead
    of her.
    he left,
    bitterness came...i'm chokin!
    starin'
    at me in
    mirrors the size
    of creation and my
    broken psyche...
    these are
    epic moments...the foundations
    of this life...
    ...d*(n! I gotta get some silver-screen,
    celluloid dreams!




    'House of Atreus' Publishing 2007
     
  2. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang... that was sum epic moments
    i must say, that was an creative flow rite derr
    so flow on
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    i hope i got you right here

    stick with your own?

    i could be wrong

    but i'm not wrong about the fire in this piece poet
     
  4. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo GHETTOAMBITION...thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!

    STREET SO'JA...you're the best!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WHOAAAAA!!!!!!!
    this piece push heat what depth this pose
     
  6. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you brotha rich...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes our own "epic moments" can be overwhelming. What if we could trade scenes with something on the motion picture screen...smh. Your pen digs deep.
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many thanks sister Watz.
     
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