Black Poetry : Envying Spring

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and the grass
    and the trees
    and the birds
    and the park benches
    were here
    where we stood
    together
    ... making wishes
    tossing loose change
    into water fountains

    and the other couples
    held hands
    coming in and out of
    shadows
    ... lovers in the blue
    of day sharing kisses
    -- intimate hugs
    touched by a breeze

    and in the distance
    music plays softly
    for the love of spring




    (c) FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rykah

    ... you have a point... and to your point
    I must say... you've been instrumental in
    helpin' me to birth yet anotha inspirational
    scribe... :) Ghosts of Winter

    thanx for the read sistah!!

    N2
     
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    Envying Summer..

    driving a hummer
    Marosa beach bound
    white sand found
    lovebirds sing harmony
    in front of me
    your pretty brown thighs
    brown eyes
    enhanced by the sun's rays
    i awaited
    the end of winter and spring so that summer could enter
    so we could venture into several degrees of passion
    we can run track
    lay back
    light the grill
    chill
    wanna swim?
    by ten p.m
    lights are dim
     
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    there are wonderful attributes all the seasons possess, I believe... and what I love most about each of them, is their individual and unique qualities that make me love them all, for different reasons....:wink:

    this is peace, N2.... and I'm so vibin off of Sherri's and J'haih's grooves, 2.

    y'all stays be's cuttin up on a reg'la! (yeah dats whutahsaid)

    :heart:

    a

    don't get me started on autumn in New York nah
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah ... :)

    I can see you now drivin' round in that hummer :lol: p'delight on the passenger side -- ya'll both cheesin' like ya in a parade :wave: ... go' on witcha baddd selves :D

    As always, thanks for the read
    N2 :)
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) my dear sis' .... you know I'm appreciatin' it wheneva you drop in for a read or two!!

    Much :heart:

    N2
     
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    Lovely flo my sista, just lovely!!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2

    I enjoyed this.
    Very pleasant read.
    Thank you. :)

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad

    Thank you my brotha! :)

    N2
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coco

    I'm glad to know
    that you enjoyed
    this...

    Thanks for reading! :)

    N2
     
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