Black Poetry : envision with me

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  1. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Envision with me, a life that would be
    Full of love and peace
    And all the fighting would cease
    And I would look out for u and and u for me
    And as far as the jealousy no more to be
    And happiness would be an essential key
    And being sad or angry would never complete
    Can u picture such a thing?
    And the joy it would bring
    A life with nothing but positive-ity
    A life without negativity
    A life with nothing but prosperity
    A life full of sincerity
    A life that is not impossible
    That is if u believe in the gospel and know the man above
    The one who constantly showers us with his love
    Acknowledge him in all the things you do and this life will be you!


    can u see it
    ;)
     
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    I'm feelin' this fo' sho'
    tho' I'm havin' a personal
    thing with God right now...
    sigh...
    I acknowledge Him and what not
    and strive to do His will
    but some things I can't do
    I mean I try and love my enemies
    but I ain't tryin' to write no
    fake --- love poems to my enemies
    sound crazy don't it?
    Well... there it is... more than
    you wanted to know haHA...
    Peace to ya!
    I love your vision!;)
     
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    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thxs skrybe, hope everything works out for u
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i feel ya a beautiful vision i see it
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    justbnme03

    Yes, I can see it. It's beautiful.

    Nice flow too. ;)

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thxs u all for envision wit me
     
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