Black Poetry : Envious

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  1. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see him standing there, his physique lit up in light,
    He is the most beautiful person, moving in the club tonight,
    He leans over the table, a bourbon in his hand,
    Beautiful blue eyes shining, hair the colour of sand,
    Girls surround his table, dying to be his,
    Each of them wanting to feel the taste of his kiss,
    He looks up, smiles and winks his eye at me,
    It's out little gesture that only I see,
    I watch from afar, a smile on my lips,
    Knowing his hands will later be around my hips,
    He walks towards me and wraps his arms around my waist,
    As he kisses me deeply, it's the bourbon that I taste,
    I feel the stares of girls, watching he and I,
    With his arms around me, from the club we fly.

    15/4/02

    *Emma*
     
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    Nyce poet, but I ain't mad atcha. Do your thang!
    I like this, has a real life feel to it, and I always seem to be at your end of the stick.
    Eternal
     
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    Emma.


    ...this was cute!! :)

    the imagery was great! i could see the scene unfolding.
    hey!... 'bout those envious folks... just tell 'em...
    "don't hate!! ...it ain't cute!!" :lol:

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  4. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad you could in some way relate Eternal, thanks for your comments and for taking the time.

    Sunshyne nice to see u in my place as always. Trust me girl, I do tell them just that.

    *Emma*
     
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    Ahhh Yeah!!

    This here is Nice!!:)
     
  6. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you muchly Rashad
     
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