Black Poetry : Entrance To True Love

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOU are my entrance to true love, no less.
    I feel so blessd, you bring out my best.
    I never imagined
    that me
    that you
    that we would be here together engaged
    in love
    in mind
    in body
    in soul
    in US!
    Though times my mind, body and soul
    grow weary my heart STILL
    beats
    and
    beats
    and beats ever so power(FULL) of you of me.
    OUR love is branded
    in me
    on me for
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    T
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    R
    N
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    Y
    All will see how I love and loved thee.

    MadLove:heart: CCBSKYN

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    OOOOOOOH ! YES

    LOVIN' THEE SO OPENLY
    SWEET AND FREELY
    ALL TOO SEE OF U AND ME
    DA LOVE
    INTO SELF SOUL FOREVER HOLD
    BOLDLY STRONGLY
    COCO U SHOWED LOVE LIKE
    LOVE GIVE SELF .......WORK DEM KEYZ :heart:
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Coco this

    piece came across so well and i

    LOVEDEDID IT

    you definitely got me feeling love right now


    DSS

    and you know i don't lie
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    peep

    love the way you expressed you all that you're definitely in love for real girl keep up on it
     
  5. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a declaration...

    of love found...
    love dwelling...
    love filling...

    true~love...keep it
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is what I'm sayin!!!

    you speak my soul in this scribe in its entirety, but let me share the line that summed it up for me:

    "All will see how I love and loved thee."


    Yes, long after life on this plane is through...your songs of love will live on...

    Keep writing it down, sis! I'm feelin you!!!

    a
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$, It is you who work your magical fingertips on dem der keyz. That which you flowed is proof. Thanks ;)


    So'ja, Without doubt through your poetry you speak truth. I thank you for EVERY kind word you send my way.
    MadLove:heart: 2U Poetic So'ja

    MADD, At this time I'm in love with me, but I hope to experience this kinda love someday. And when I find it, I'll make a conscious effort to keep up on it. Thanks for the advice;)

    MsD, I heard that! Thanks for the sistahly love:heart:

    Alyce, Yes you do feel me......Your line tells me. Thanks

    MadLove:heart: 2 my sistahs&brothas
    CCBSKYN
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CoCo....


    well... if he didn't know... NOW... he knows. :)

    this was a beautiful affirmation of your heart
    & soul!! i loved the flow & the feel of this!!

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
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