Black Poetry : Enternal Affairs

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enter here...........
    where paradigms begin
    where standards will be
    set / and old skool
    lovers will be banished
    to amnesiatic lands
    they will be no more
    and you will once again
    feel as if you are a virgin
    whose body has never said
    "mercy" to yourgasms

    Enter here............
    where your memoirs will
    be reborn / and existing
    pages will be removed and
    pushed into the afterlife
    and it's prior existence to
    script will be cloned to be
    scribed once again /

    Enter here.............
    where voices echo off of
    scenes waiting for you to
    be cast au naturel / cause
    your natural state is one
    of dreams...and I sleep
    to still frame your presence

    Enter here..............
    this place where your lexicon
    exists of nothing but exhalations
    inhalations moans groans and adjectives
    to describe this
    endorphin induced inebriation
    as you walk
    with a maze controlling
    your stride / to the bathroom
    to find reflections of your
    original self before entering
    here......................

    WHAT DO YOU SEE?

    your body engulfed in a glow
    as if you've been to the other
    side.......let's nickname you
    HEAVEN....................
    and rewrite the rules for getting
    in and place a sign that reads...
    ENTER HERE.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    'Blak' the man, the man is 'Blak'...


    Your mental facilities retain more reasoning that cannot be measured or be compared. Recounting & recordings of the
    day-to-day 'goings on' - but as though it were just a theatrical production; hence you might just be Sophocles, Euripides, or even the great Shakespere himself?

    Who knows what you possess inside your creative intellectual faculty - all I want is to know when will our concurrence take place? I'm definitely ready for the meeting of the minds....ya feel me...


    luvin' this piece...

    Peace-n-Poetry
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Verb, Verb, Verb....

    i love what you do to me!!
    this line:

    both exquisite & fantastic!
    oh! & did i forget to say Welcome? (lol)

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx ya'll...it feels like family in here. To all the familiar names; GA, dnommo, N2...when's the family reunion?
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey ya'll what's happenin'? Tell me what ya think.

    one love, blak
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BlakV,

    I'm all ova this one too!!! Man, ya be one exceptional brotha with ya talents!!!

    Impressive skillz fella!!!

    Respect
    GQ
     
  7. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Frito Lay Talented!

    A brutha cant read just one...lol Too Tight!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  8. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    extraordinarily tyte....
    i shall re-enter my eyes to this piece again, mos def...

    j'hiah,
    enterin'
    in his serene garden.....
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Yes!!!
    Please do come in ...

    very nice BlakVerb!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Blakverb....I love this...go 'head and scribe.
     
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