Black Poetry : Entering my mind

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know I told YOU
    that entering this mind
    would convolute your
    mind
    see there are too many
    trap doors / closed windows
    and bolted locks
    holding host age my thoughts
    that when released seek
    the sun and want to scream
    of it's existence and what that
    means....
    ..............my mind is an offspring
    of experiences and journeys
    to lands of truth and what it
    means to me and reality that
    presents itself to me
    sometimes....ruff, rugged, and
    raw....but always real......
    ..........it spins in cyclonic
    fashion from anti-U.S.A to passion
    from revolution to heart felt emotions
    from....life to death
    exhalation to last breath........
    my minds goes PERPETUALLY
    I chase it daily to slow it down
    and I grow tired of the game.......
    so enter if you must....
    .....enjoy the ride.

    (c)2001 blakverb "off da top thinkin' "
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLaKnEsS....


    (LOL) i knew my persistancy would pay off...

    thanks for the invitation... i think i'll take you
    up on the offer... besides... i ain't skurred! :)

    you know what i think 'bout your off da top
    so in an effort NOT to be redundant... i'll just
    say... keep doin' what you do BLaK Man!

    One.
    Ga~
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    Let it all go!

    :nono:
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    :uzi: :confused:


    Got Chaos?


    :D
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dear poet, i'm lovin' this piece, fo sho. keep on scribin', as i continue to watch.

    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it must be well worth the ride
    because your thought is vast
    and your mind can't be a bad
    place to be...
    i find it very interesting.
    keep it flowin like you do
    blak.
    -7
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dawg

    feeling the mind power of a great thinker


    Peace
     
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