Black Poetry : Enter My Queendom

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Would u like to travel to a foreign place,
    Where your mind takes u to outer space,
    Where nothin but pure gold exists,
    Come into my queendom, ladies and gentleman,
    1st i'm going to show u what my queendom is all about,
    Not about riches or money, but what is inside and out,
    Right now, you're in da lobby,
    When u go down tha hall, u won't see anybody,
    My queendom is like a maze, so follow me carefully,
    Or you'll get lost, in a quick of a heartbeat,
    I have stairs dat move up and down,
    And my palace, as u can see goes all around,
    Are u with me so far,
    Are u seeing shooting stars,
    Come now with me, to da next part of my queendom,
    U notice all da doors are da same don't u,
    Come quick, before da doors start to change,
    Anotha thing i had forgot to tell u ladies and gentleman,
    Da city of Egypt, is where my queendom was made long ago,
    As u can see, dis was my first home,
    I've been here 4 many years and centuries,
    And all dis time, changes into many decades,
    My throne shines beside u all,
    Watch yo step, or u will fall,
    My queendom is made of pure gold,
    Da elasticity of dis will be enough to hold,
    As u can see, i have no king,
    But i'm awaiting him whoever it shall be,
    Whoever my king wil be, will have da power of well-being,
    Da power of self control, and da mind to be free,
    2 please me endlessly, and to hold me cherishably,
    One day, a prince will be born,
    And will be honored king when he gets older,
    A princess will be born at last,
    2 take over her own queendom land,
    I hope u enjoyed your stay at my queendom,
    Now which way 2 exit, do u remember how so?

    Aaliyahmonet
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who would want to leave?

    Magnicent oh Queenly one...a job and poem here well done. The picture painted with perfection , we need not ask your Majesty for exit direction...we want to make your Queendom home...
    Blessings on yo Queendom!

    * Gurl you know you had me shaking my head in agreement as I concur with your elegant flow...cause us Queens got it like that you know! And come visit my Queendom whenever you like...
     
  3. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mi casa es su casa:) Whenever u need someone to talk to, i'm here for ya babygirl:)

    Luv,

    Aaliyahmonet
     
  4. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    excelent piece aaliyah

    keep up the good work
     
  5. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really nice work here

    one luv
     
  6. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mslucious-Stay sweet girl
    Lonelypoet-Keep yo head up high aight.
    Mind$oul-I got yo numba:)

    Luv,

    Aaliyahmonet
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'kay can i enter da door
    and see what's in stor
    if i do will i be yo boo!
    will u make me da King
    and listen to da love i sing !
    as i bring many thing before ya throne
    and allow me , my heart to roam !????
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I bow in your presence and honor thee for the queen you are...
    I will gladly serve you as your Knight of Nights...
     
  9. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey rich, come into my queendom, and i will honor u king.:)
    Bishop-I shall honor u with a nice reward.

    Aaliyahmonet
     
  10. msluciousb

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    Bishop you got's to make up yo mind...

    Aaliyah tell him he can't be no Bishop and no Knight at the same time...huh? Can he? But it is yo Queendom....LOL
    Just messing with ya! :D
    Blessings On Ya House...look at Rich all up in the mix! :D
     
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