Black Poetry : ENRAPTURE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sierra, Jul 31, 2003.

  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Warm July night,
    lover's meet and unite,
    glowing candle light
    giving aura to this
    moon-filled room.

    Alluring aromatic scents
    of sandlewood incense
    and fresh sliced fruit
    give accent and ambiance
    as lovers snuggle and smooch.

    Glasses of champagne
    going to their heads,
    rose petals scattered
    across the floor and bed
    as the both lovingly think
    about the first time they met.

    Feeling alive with passion
    and completely safe
    in the loving grace
    of one another's
    tender embrace.

    Blessing each other's
    sweet beautiful faces
    with succulent
    amorous kisses.

    Falling deeper
    into a sense
    of elated bliss
    from one another's
    gentle caresses.

    Eager wanton
    hands stroking
    every inch of
    of one another's
    longing bodies.

    In hot rhythmic unison
    the core of their beings
    are fevorishly afire
    as they succumb
    to their every desire.

    Their souls
    intertwining,
    empowering
    one another
    as they become
    enraptured as one.

    To the most
    sacred part of her,
    she senses the
    warmth of his
    beautiful gift.

    What tomorrow holds,
    they are unsure of,
    but tonight, they know,
    they have become
    whole.

    ©2003 Sierra Raines :heart:
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Envision me inside,
    As your mind loses its own grip
    Utilizing space ~ with time to spend
    I take you there...
    Time and again-
     
  3. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey 1Poet, :wave:

    How did you know
    it was you
    I had in mind
    to take me
    to that place
    of ecstacy?

    Where are
    we to meet?
    I feel the passion
    of your heat.
    In your arms, I wish,
    to never leave.

    Poet, I love your comment!!

    It is :hot: :hot: :hot:!!

    Thanks for writing!! ;)

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  4. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow Sierra! (and 1 poet)...
    y'all should connect soon...

    tyte piece!!
     
  5. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was beautiful Sierra!!!
    I see a lot of growth in this peace!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beatiful girl!!
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oops! i can't spell...i mean "beautiful"
     
  8. SkinDeep

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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sierra, this was very passionate, I agree with Playwitit
    Much growth...........This was beautiful!

    Much luv,
    Angeli
     
  10. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey j'hiah, :wave:

    :thanks: for the nice comment!!

    Maybe you're right about 1 Poet!!

    ~Sierra~ :heart: