Black Poetry : Enough with gunplay (freestyle)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by merck, Jun 30, 2005.

  1. merck

    merck Member MEMBER

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    I say enough with gun play//legs broke? Can't walk away?
    Your no longer a man if you die today//Why yall say this whenever we play
    Your cd's in our cars//It's like your from mars//not role models//in fact your far
    Infecting our ears//you know who you are//I won't name names//
    need to change the game//put down the warfare//use your mind for a change
    Enough no need to act tough//never know when it's your turn to get snuffed
    You know the saying//live by it you'll die the same//so stop what your saying
    Need to come from a different angle//teach knowledge and truth//
    set an example for the new youth//straight from you//no better proof
    fullfilment in everthing you say and do//so put down the guns
    only hurting your sons//and daughters if you have some
    and if you don't//remember this quote//you never know who get's hurt,
    life is not a joke
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up life is so dear
    but da fools don't care
    they bare all arm
    guns to muff u out
    to gain some street clout
    time to wake up and rise
    from this no suprise to face
    gun play ban start today

    this was str8 up on point and tyte
    flow on loving ya write poet !!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just walking away, in and of itself, won't kill you. But staying to fight, may...This was on point poet, do flow on.
     
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    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :teach: TEACH !!!

    I look forward to reading more from you Poet..

    Much Peace ~
     
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    peace poet,

    true indeed merk/ today's lyrics are so bizerk
    they're talking about murder and ice/instead of how many soldiers are hurt
    they must have forgotten KRS, P.E./and the poor righteous teachers
    today they sound more like some unenlightened creatures
    traveling in the wilderness
    with no sense of sight
    where wrongdoing sells records
    so righteousness ain't right
    cause being righteous won't fill their pockets
    so they become studio gangsters to get that light
    and it hurts me too my heart
    to see our beautiful black talent wastin'
    we have to get them to stop sellin' out
    and 180 the degree they're facin'

    nice flow bruh.......................respect!!

    peace & love
     
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