Black Poetry : Enough is Enough

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaz, Jul 6, 2002.

  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now don’t get me wrong
    I do love you more than life itself
    But enough is enough
    You walk around here like you own the place
    You always want me to do this and do that
    And no matter what I do it is never enough
    You fuss about this and fuss about that
    And when you don’t get your way you even have the nerve
    To pitch a tantrum like a two-year-old spoiled brat

    Well I hope you have enjoyed these last two years cus
    It is all about to change
    Come Monday no matter what you say or what you do
    As God is my witness
    You are!
    Going to daycare
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol:

    this was funny man !
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very funna! :laugh:

    I could hear this spoken.
    I love poetry with a twist.


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    i read this yesterday

    i think it's funny too :lol:

    pd
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes you just gotta let em know who’s the Boss.
    You know put a little fear in their little hearts!

    The truth is he has been in day care but when he jacked me up by my collar in church the other day and read me the riot act, I began plotting my revenge and if he wasn’t already in daycare I thought the threat would be a good idea.

    thanks for reading me
     
  6. Destee

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    are they born think'n they spoze ta run thangzzzz ???!!!

    i remember growing up, anticipating being grown ...

    thangzzz dun changed :)

    very nice Shaz

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Destee it's always a pleasure to here from you
     
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    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this... :D :rolling: :lol:

    They do think they run things..
    Thanks for the read, made my day..
    :)
     
  9. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was really good, I almost missed the twist cause I didn't read to the end then when I read the other replies-I re-read it and man, children are another story altogether...can't wait to have some of my own..

    lo'
     
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    lolololololol...poet poet poet...you got me there...send 'em send 'em to daycare and don't look back cuz' that's when you change yo' mind...

    excellent scribe...
     
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