Poetry Critiques : enlightenment (saed still.1986)

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  1. carsonh

    carsonh Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    enlightenment. (close to home iii)

    where is enlightenment found?
    does it dwell in darkened rooms,
    or does it rest on top of mountains?
    does it hide within another,
    is it found within piety;
    pious men in pious company,
    do they hold enlightenment’s key?
    maybe enlightenment lies beneath the sea
    in davie’s keep,
    in a forest,
    or on a lonely street.
    where is enlightenment found?
    look beyond a mirror, and your search will be long;
    around the hearts of those who seek, is the secret of enlightenment bound.

    (saed still. 1986)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice piece wit all da action in it .......great write don't change a thing
     
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