Quiet Poetry Lounge : ENERGY

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by pztvnrg, Apr 2, 2001.

  1. pztvnrg

    pztvnrg Active Member MEMBER

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    There is an invisible all-knowing energy
    haunting me
    It appears when I am unconscious
    Does it know with my eyes closed
    I am defenseless?
    Whatever lies between fear and fearless
    is where I'm sleeping

    My cries for help are muted
    I struggle for consciousness
    Eyes are finally open
    No longer asleep between the contradiction
    I am awake and afraid

    It speaks to me without words
    and I understand
    This imperceptible
    All-knowing energy is
    love and

    I

    WANT

    IT
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ever so

    tight!!!

    Yes, 'love' is a hunger...a force that surpasses all things...indeed, our very energy!

    Thank you for this, Poet!

    A
     
  3. pztvnrg

    pztvnrg Active Member MEMBER

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    alyce i thank you for appreciating, pztvnrg
     
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    emprezz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Love this piece. The soul of my spirit applauds

    >>>clap, clap, clap<<<<<

    A "Love Jones" applaus 2 u 2

    >>>>snap, snap, snap<<<<
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully posed .....tyte flow on love hit
     
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