Black Poetry : ENDOCTRINED NATION

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  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    ENDOCTRINED NATION

    According to Webster,
    to indoctrinate is to
    influence with viewpoints,
    opinions, and principles...

    ..A supremely softer
    way of saying: the sending
    of subliminal signals to the
    subconscious mind to
    Stupefy and subdue
    scores of souls
    into submission
    and support
    of suspect and
    sadistic schemes....

    ...and several sleeping
    souls seem too sidetracked
    by these subliminal
    subconscious signals
    and stupification
    to stop suspect and
    sadistic schemes
    of those seeking
    to subdue us into
    submission and support
    of senselessness.
    But...

    Black America
    has long been
    an Endoctrined Nation
    through indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines
    that are subliminally
    and subconsciously overt
    that they subvert
    in a way that by-passes
    all mental and spiritual alerts
    until the mind-f**king
    feels so damned good
    that we don't know or care
    how much it really hurts
    to be an Endoctrined Nation
    by indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines.

    "In" Doctrines like
    the William Lynch Syndrome;
    it resides within domes
    of black folks so deeply
    that it splits homes,
    families, friendships,
    relationships, and communities
    of us confused people
    deeply desiring
    disharmony and division.
    Unable to break free
    from this mental, emotional,
    and spiritual prison,
    we blame each other
    more than we blame
    the people and ideas
    responsible for
    our fucckked/messed up position.

    Pay attention!!!
    For divisions are the swords
    that your Euro-centric Lord,
    William Lynch,
    put between you,
    and they has become
    the base beliefs
    of your religions.
    Just take a look
    at your own hood.
    Every day and night,
    we argue and fight,
    kill and die over bullshhitt
    to a point that
    calling our real God
    would do us no good,
    'Cause we forego
    forgiving our own kind
    while making mention
    of our former masters
    as beings divine,
    doing nothing
    besides sitting and accepting
    when they do us wrong,

    plus donning self-damning doctrines
    like, "it was in the past.
    Let's forget it and just move on."
    In ignorance, we ignore the fact
    that our joust for justice
    isn't over and
    our struggles continue.
    But that's because
    you're moaning and groaning
    in pleasure, pillow facing,
    and the diicck of indoctrination
    still bends you.

    You see...

    Black America
    has long been
    an Endoctrined Nation
    through indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines
    that are subliminally
    and subconsciously overt
    that they subvert
    in a way that by-passes
    all mental and spiritual alerts
    until the mind-fucckking
    feels so damned good ...sooooooo gooodd!!!!!

    that we don't know or care
    how much it really hurts
    to be an Endoctrined Nation
    by indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines.

    "In" Doctrines
    like "-isms":
    the many madnesses of mankind
    born from many solicitous venoms
    that support systems of control.
    We blame and disrespect
    based on bigotry in some aspect
    but never connect
    with the true cause and effect
    that has taken hold;
    the root venom being
    the root word named
    before the suffix;
    the ideology drugs
    that bred fanatics and lunatics
    after just one fix;
    things like nationalism,
    racism, sexism, capitalism,
    patriotism, and fascism.
    Isn't it funny that those
    exposing these evils
    end up dead, denounced,
    pronounced insane, or in prison
    because their words
    seem to have truth in them?
    It's partly because
    we are part of a nation
    that is built on
    and lives on
    so many lies
    that we despise
    any truths that could
    open up our eyes
    and allow enough analysis
    to help us determine
    the source and cause
    of the deception.

    Like misused sexuality,
    Indoctrination is
    a bloody weapon;
    a weapon that maimed many
    great and positive ideologies,
    corrupted both people's souls
    and physiologies,
    not to mention slain
    many great black leaders.

    But we're taking the bait
    ever-biting, yet never biting
    and becoming the batteries
    that operate the unseen hands
    that barely feed us....
    ...and to think, we pass on
    the idea of obedience
    to this madness to every fetus.
    Think about this:
    they can defeat us
    easily by declaring that
    they don't need us.
    I can see us now...
    ..panicking, fighting,
    and killing each other more
    while calling on
    some Euro-centric Image
    of our Lord in blasphemy,
    "Jesus!! Save Us!!
    We can't think for ourselves!!"
    And in those cries,
    we still won't realize
    that our lack of unity
    is our real hell, and
    because we won't try
    to unify or unite
    a basic way of thinking,
    we'll keep the
    mind-fuccckk going
    while not
    allowing the truth
    to sink in,
    because....

    Black America
    has long been
    an Endoctrined Nation
    through indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines
    that are subliminally
    and subconsciously overt
    that they subvert
    in a way that by-passes
    all mental and spiritual alerts
    until the mind-f**king
    feels so damned good
    that we don't know or care
    how much it really hurts
    to be an Endoctrined Nation
    by indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines.

    "In" Doctrines;
    the internalized
    lies that go
    unchallenged due to fear
    that were taught to us
    by our parents, teachers,
    and then our peers.
    As we got older
    our eyes became affixed
    to tell-lie-vision
    and we affixed radios
    to our ears.
    Then when
    our vocab improved
    in our hands
    magazines and
    newspapers appeared.
    In our churches,
    we got more of the same;
    moral truths passed by
    pimps called preachers
    posing as prophets
    positioned as bishops
    playing our enemies' chess games,
    and it's a damned shame
    that we do whatever
    is pleasing and acceptable
    in our enemies' sight,
    and that we pray
    we do better each day
    so we can sleep good at night;
    only to awaken,
    go through our
    morning routines
    and march happily
    back to those plantations,
    now called J-O-Bs
    Where we are kept
    Just over broke,
    paid enough
    to stay in check,
    work like slaves
    for meager paychecks,
    and because of this reality,
    relationships between
    black men and women
    stay vexed;
    each of us nearly neurotic
    that our economic
    state is so catatonic,
    it's beyond catastrophic.
    And the harsh truth is
    that this is all cause and effect.
    Because, when in the face
    of wrongdoing,
    you sit and accept;
    when because of money,

    each other
    you hate and neglect,
    when perpetual pain
    instead of political power
    you elect;
    When your enemies rule you,
    what else should you expect?!!!
    Even your thinking
    in terms of gender roles
    are controlled
    by your enemies
    sexually indoctrinate
    magnetic thought poles,
    you know,
    those things
    that transmitted the ideas
    that fuckkked you
    out of your minds
    as well as your souls!!!

    Did you hear me?
    I said they fuccckedd you
    out of your mind
    as well as your soul.
    That’s right,
    they’ve fuccckkd you
    out of your minds
    as well as your souls.

    Is it sinking in?

    Black America
    has long been
    an Endoctrined Nation
    through indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines
    that are subliminally
    and subconsciously overt
    that they subvert
    in a way that by-passes
    all mental and spiritual alerts
    until the mind-fuckking
    feels so damned good
    that we don't know or care
    how much it really hurts
    to be an Endoctrined Nation
    by indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines.

    Please
    Wake
    Up

    hookup......black cause its in my soul not my skin :thinking: :thinking:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Teach... I'm listening.
     
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    black cause its in my soul not my skin --- now that's deep

    You are truly a Griot…pronounced Gree-oh

    Who has undertaken the pivotal task of using your infinite wisdom, knowledge and insight of our people…to take us to new levels of awareness…

    Wherever you lead…I shall too, go…

    This took some time to absorb…but the best journeys are the most in depth journeys
    For you have left no stone unturned…
    And I loved the way you broke down the variations of the “ Endoctrined Nation
    by indoctrinations, Endoctrined with "In" Doctrines”…that was tyte

    As I’ve said before…it is evident that we and poetry alike, are in the hands of, no longer a nascent master, but a Master…a King…a Poet…a Thinker…and a Griot

    May every ear and mind be unchained…when you write!

    Loving you…Sage
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother...

    I'm going to raise the blak fist...and say

    Marvelous, inspiring work.

    heavy brother and definitely certified dope that all need to get high on.

    10

    keep scribing

    your brother blak
     
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    two daps on da black hand side clyde...
    i would really like to here this joint son...
    and the emotion packed behind it...i'm in awe by this joint son
    good ish...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one mo gin, in honor of "Black History Month"...
    it's befitting... :injured:
     
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    Blak intellect never sounded SOOOOO good my brotha

    This was choice power for our people

    Lets bump this back up where it need be :read:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    power in the voice & pen this was on point and reality check to the mind
    I'm most def listening speak on poet !!!!!!!!
     
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    Ladies and gentlemen:

    This is NOT the work of Tha HookUpMan.

    He's plagerized MY work. I wrote this piece in Houston Texas on January 9, 2004!!! I've also posted this work on these three websites, and have recited this piece a total of 96 times in Atlanta, GA, Houston, TX, Greer, SC, Georgetown, SC, and will (hopefully) be reciting this piece in Las Vegas, Nevada on April 22, 2006.

    http://www.nubianpoets.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=4487&hl= - Nubian Poets.com
    http://p200.ezboard.com/fprysmaticdreamsfrm85.showMessage?topicID=68.topic - Prysmatic Dreams (My Archives)
    http://www.soultry.org/phpbb/viewtopic.php?t=3850&highlight= - Soultry.org

    I DO, however, thank you for the appreciation of MY work. I especially thank the poet who took the time and warned me that this was happening. Anyone who wants to contact me can do so through e-mail or simply go to www.prysmaticdreams.com and ezmail me.

    Nyne Elementz
     
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