Black Poetry : Endoctrined Nation (From REAL Author)

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  1. NyneElementz

    NyneElementz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    According to Webster,
    to indoctrinate is to
    influence with viewpoints,
    opinions, and principles...

    ..A supremely softer
    way of saying: the sending
    of subliminal signals to the
    subconscious mind to
    Stupefy and subdue
    scores of souls
    into submission
    and support
    of suspect and
    sadistic schemes....

    ...and several sleeping
    souls seem too sidetracked
    by these subliminal
    subconscious signals
    and stupification
    to stop suspect and
    sadistic schemes
    of souls
    stuck on supremacy
    steadily seeking
    to subdue us into
    submission and support
    of senselessness.
    But...

    Black America
    has long been
    an Endoctrined Nation
    through indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines
    that are subliminally
    and subconsciously overt
    that they subvert
    in a way that by-passes
    all mental and spiritual alerts
    until the mind-screwing
    just feels so damned good
    that we don't know or care
    how much it really hurts
    to be an Endoctrined Nation
    by indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines.

    "In" Doctrines like
    the William Lynch Syndrome;
    it resides within domes
    of black folks so deeply
    that it splits homes,
    families, friendships,
    relationships, and communities
    of us confused people
    deeply desiring
    disharmony and division.
    Unable to break free
    from this mental, emotional,
    and spiritual prison,
    we blame each other
    more than we blame
    the people and ideas
    responsible for
    our messed up position.
    Pay attention!!!
    For divisions are the swords
    that your Euro-centric Lord,
    William Lynch,
    put between you,
    and they has become
    the base beliefs
    of your religions.
    Just take a look
    at your own hood.
    Every day and night,
    we argue and fight,
    kill and die
    over nonsense
    to a point that
    calling our real God
    would do us no good,
    'Cause we forego
    forgiving our own kind
    while making mention
    of our former masters
    as beings divine,
    doing nothing
    besides sitting and accepting
    when they do us wrong,
    plus donning self-damning doctrines
    like, "it was in the past.
    Let's forget it and just move on."
    In ignorance, we ignore the fact
    that our joust for justice
    isn't over and
    our struggles continue.
    But that's because
    you're moaning and groaning
    in pleasure, pillow facing,
    and the thrusts
    of indoctrination
    still bends you.

    You see...
    Black America
    has long been
    an Endoctrined Nation
    through indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines
    that are subliminally
    and subconsciously overt
    that they subvert
    in a way that by-passes
    all mental and spiritual alerts
    until the mind-screwing
    just feels so damned good
    that we don't know or care
    how much it really hurts
    to be an Endoctrined Nation
    by indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines.

    "In" Doctrines
    like "-isms":
    the many madnesses of mankind
    born from many solicitous venoms
    that support systems of control.
    We blame and disrespect
    based on bigotry in some aspect
    but never connect
    with the true cause and effect
    that has taken hold;
    the root venom being
    the root word named
    before the suffix;
    the ideology drugs
    that bred fanatics and lunatics
    after just one fix;
    things like nationalism,
    racism, sexism, capitalism,
    patriotism, and fascism.
    Isn't it funny that those
    exposing these evils
    end up dead, denounced,
    pronounced insane, or in prison
    because their words
    seem to have truth in them?
    It's partly because
    we are part of a nation
    that is built on
    and lives on
    so many lies
    that we despise
    any truths that could
    open up our eyes
    and allow enough analysis
    to help us determine
    the source and cause
    of the deception.
    Like misused sexuality,
    Indoctrination is
    a bloody weapon;
    a weapon that maimed many
    great and positive ideologies,
    corrupted both people's souls
    and physiologies,
    not to mention slain
    many great black leaders.
    But we're taking the bait
    ever-biting, yet never biting
    and becoming the batteries
    that operate the unseen hands
    that barely feed us....
    ...and to think, we pass on
    the idea of obedience
    to this madness to every fetus.
    Think about this:
    they can defeat us
    easily by declaring that
    they don't need us.
    I can see us now...
    ..panicking, fighting,
    and killing each other more
    while calling on
    some Euro-centric Image
    of our Lord in blasphemy,
    "Jesus!! Save Us!!
    We can't think for ourselves!!"
    And in those cries,
    we still won't realize
    that our lack of unity
    is our real hell,
    and because we won't try
    to unify or unite
    a basic way of thinking,
    we'll keep the
    mind-screw going
    while never allowing
    the truth to sink in,
    because....

    Black America
    has long been
    an Endoctrined Nation
    through indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines
    that are subliminally
    and subconsciously overt
    that they subvert
    in a way that by-passes
    all mental and spiritual alerts
    until the mind-screwing
    just feels so damned good
    that we don't know or care
    how much it really hurts
    to be an Endoctrined Nation
    by indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines.

    "In" Doctrines;
    the internalized
    lies that go
    unchallenged due to fear
    that were taught to us
    by our parents, teachers,
    and then our peers.
    As we got older
    our eyes became affixed
    to tell-lie-vision
    and we affixed radios
    to our ears.
    Then when
    our vocab improved
    in our hands
    magazines and
    newspapers appeared.
    In our churches,
    we got more of the same;
    moral truths passed by
    pimps called preachers
    posing as prophets
    positioned as bishops
    playing our enemies' chess games,
    and it's a damned shame
    that we do whatever
    is pleasing and acceptable
    in our enemies' sight,
    and that we pray
    we do better each day
    so we can sleep good at night;
    only to awaken,
    go through our
    morning routines
    and march happily
    back to those plantations,
    now called J-O-Bs
    Where we are kept
    Just over broke,
    paid enough
    to stay in check,
    work like slaves
    for meager paychecks,
    and because of this reality,
    relationships between
    black men and women
    stay vexed;
    each of us nearly neurotic
    that our economic
    state is so catatonic,
    it's beyond catastrophic.
    And the harsh truth is
    that this is all cause and effect.
    Because, when in the face
    of wrongdoing,
    you sit and accept;
    when because of money,
    each other
    you hate and neglect,
    when perpetual pain
    instead of political power
    you elect;
    When your enemies rule you,
    what else should you expect?!!!
    Even your thinking
    in terms of gender roles
    are controlled
    by your enemies
    sexually indoctrinate
    magnetic thought poles;
    You know,
    those transmitters
    of ideas and principles
    that screwed you
    out of your mind
    as well as your soul.

    Did you hear me?
    I said they screwed you
    out of your mind
    as well as your soul.

    That’s right,
    they’ve screwed you
    out of your mind
    as well as your soul.

    I said,
    they’ve screwed you
    out of your minds
    as well as your souls.

    Is it sinking in?
    because
    Black America
    has long been
    an Endoctrined Nation
    through indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines
    that are subliminally
    and subconsciously overt
    that they subvert
    in a way that by-passes
    all mental and spiritual alerts
    until the mind-screwing
    just feels so damned good
    that we don't know or care
    how much it really hurts
    to be an Endoctrined Nation
    by indoctrinations,
    Endoctrined with
    "In" Doctrines.

    Please...
    Wake...
    Up!!!

    Copyright 2004, Nyne Elementz
     
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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found
    welcome to the house of peace and respect
    welcome from above as i bless this piece some love

    True indeed every note , verse and script lingers
    the tales of mental slavery within lingers
    to be awaken in the mist of truth abound within
    this piece say it all and open the sense of morrow
    tyte drop on da real ......the realism felt.......welcome NyneElementz
     
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    NyneElementz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the love, bro. Sorry you saw this first at the hands of someone who stole my words. But that simply means I must be making a serious impression on someone.
     
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    I have read this, at more than one site, smh, but I didn't realize that you were the true author. Thank you for clearing this up. And as far as the poem is concerned.... How do I comment on such intricate layers of expression, delving into the mind control that has plagued us for so many years... All I can say really is this scribe is beyond awesome....
     
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