Black Poetry : ENDLESS EYES

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I DINT KNOW WUT TO PUT UP SO I PUT THIS UP I HOPE YU GUYS LIKE IT!!!!!!SHE STANDS IN THE MIRROR,
    WATCHING THE REFLECTION THAT STARES BACK.
    BUT WHAT SHE SEES IN THE MIRROR,
    THROWS HER OFF TRACK.
    IT'S NOT THE COLOR OF THE EYES,
    WHETHER HAZEL OR MORE GREEN.
    BUT ALL OF THE LIES BEHIND THEM, LIES OF WHAT SHE'S BEEN SEING.
    ITS NOT ALL THE HAPPINESS SHE THOUGHT WAS THERE,
    BUT SADNESS AND ANGER OF ALL SHE'S HAD TO BEAR.
    "A PERSON WHO CARED" SHE THINKS,
    "WOULDN'T WANT TO SEE THAT PAIN, BUT WOULD WANT TO BRING LIGHT INTO THE EYES OF WHICH THEY STARE"
    "HMMMMMM" SHE SAYS,
    AND THEN THE FACE DISAPPEARS.
    THE EYES GO DEEPER,
    FEELING THE ESSENCE OF HER ALREADY SCARRED HEART.
    SHE OPENS HER MOUTH,
    AND THE WORDS EXIT SLOWLY.
    "ONE DAY IT WILL BE BETTER,
    IT HAS TO BE"
    A HARD PAST AND A HOPEFUL FUTURE,
    ALL IN A PAIR OF ENDLESS EYES.
    HOW CAN I SEE?
    BECAUSE THOSE EYES,
    THOSE ENDLESS PAIR OF EYES ARE MINE.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was tyte welcome to the poetic flave
    of Destee.com .....welcome to the family
    i see you mastering the endless eyes !!!!

    i will remove the second post you have , happy you join us in flow
    to share and give love as love is given......welcome
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm loving it flow on poet.
     
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    Nice flow poet, Thanks for sharing.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANX NEVAR
     
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    this is a great piece
     
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    i like the feed back lol
     
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