Black Poetry : Ending

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Froggy1, Jun 22, 2005.

  1. Froggy1

    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man you gotta realize the big lie going around rap no one wants to be profound cause that noise is considered underground it seems like a brotha with a message is treated like he read a passage out of the great book making him the cosmic cook but naw now hip hop is regulated by the law and all g unit makes with a dream is a bull AB rhyme scheme to get that cream maaan
     
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    word up !!!
    i hear ya on this ending note
     
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    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks man
     
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    most welcome .......break us off another one !
     
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    u aint neva lied about g-unit...
    it's more about promotions then actual skill...
    drop sum mo holmes...

    one love
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    BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE Nefertum Husia Shayheh MEMBER

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    (fore myself)

    i strip my clothing down,
    my body is art,
    just like nefertiti's beautiful design,
    the opposite of high,
    when head up warm on the seat,
    out comes never ending,
    inhaling life circulating into my gut,
    across my sheets of hard softness,
    i write my eras chronicle sentenced,
    feeling refreshingly well afterwards,
    dumping matters out my mine,
    into the cold swirling whirlwinds of hell,
    flushing steel bars away,
    i drew my key of eternal existence,
    jumped out my pages of the book written,
    released myself militant crawling to the light,
    the gopher pops up in your favored season,
    below in my burrows are the mazes,
    abyss holds my depths falling unknown ending.
     
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    I didn't say anything when you posted a whole short story in response to one of my poems, but you are getting ridiculous with this now. It's disrespectful to post your own poetry or whateva in someone elses thread, especially when you haven't even commented on the op's poem. No one does it to you in your poetry threads!!

    It's a whole different thing if the op asks you to add on to their poem or something, but i have yet to see where anyone has asked you to do that. Just post your own thread if you feel you have something to say. dat all!
     
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    dude what you are talking about???? i'm doing this for anger therapy and self promotion so nobody gets it twisted yo!!!! this is not about you n***** i killer thoughts on mind about this ******* than ran me over purposely just last week and couple days ago promising he would pay me and i got his address and workplace waiting on the dough rather than going to court and pressing charges n***** so you don't know what i'm going through and how dare you assume i'm disrespectful. you need to get over your bullcrap and egos will quick and like i said come see me if you think you real n****** cause i will light you up with a quickness without color or not. this is not a threat but a promise. see i was calm grooving to instrumentals until your sorry *** came up in my shhhhh talking what you don't know!!!! keep playing with me!!! as a matter of fact come now ...come right now.... i'm putting shells into my mossberg. let me be and stay true or i will come and find you seriously. i'm still military and got recon skills and got nothing to lose.
     
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    And i post in my own thread but guess what??? what does the rules say???? i just got a warning the other day from Destee so i correct the solution so who are you to reverse the rules??? keep talking that ****
     
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    just quit reading and following my stuff n***** mind yo own business or block me out but if it's dope then you felt it so keep coming back fore some more cause you sought me out i didn't seek you out. what you talking about was the past so stop it or grow up. peace.
     
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