Black Poetry : End of Infatuation

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  1. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i don't know the stars in
    your eyes no more
    the way your buck teeth gleam
    when you smile
    maybe i'll start to see what you mean
    and know what the f*** I stay here for

    i know you're out there looking for what's new
    hooked on coke, or speed, or sex
    rope-a-dope
    i'm losing hope
    so what do you think is next
    you want me to find some new young
    piece to do too?

    i used to think of crinoline and baby's breath
    satin, lace, and pigeons choking on brown rice
    roses maybe
    but i aint your baby
    cause you aint never seen me no way but nice
    now i'm ready to leave your discotheque

    you nickel and dime me with make
    believe kisses
    make me scream in imaginary ecstasy
    heavenly spasms
    overblown orgasms
    oh yeah, i was faking didn't you see
    you might call it love
    but i don't know what the f*** this is
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    uhhhh ruhhhhhh, thanks for keepin' it gully. But, uhhh ruhhhhhhh. You kinda rough ain't ya? :lol:

    But, it's ok. Come fake with me, baby. ;) :D

    Thanks for sharing.

    :toast: :D
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected]....i'm speechless...lol
     
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    phew!!! kinda "rough on a cut", aint ya babe???
    like salt on a wound.....lol
    you kinda got the sound of a woman scorn
    but don't worry babydoll we're all here with ya
    to help ya through the pain
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i dont know what to say...wow
     
  6. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Monetary, nemasis - I would say I'm sorry for being "rough", but ain't love rough sometimes?

    &monetary - would I have to fake with you? Seems there's enough of that going on

    mzblkangel, LovelyGoldenOne - thanks ya'll make a sister feel loved
     
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    I'm speechless cause your hitting a soft spot! lot's of love, this is tight.
     
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