Black Poetry : Enamored

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  1. jus_dat_nice

    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just a quick one


    Reprieve from my pursiut of happiness
    Hazy delusions in a late night's dream
    Proclamations of leaps of faith with you in mind
    Vows to be yours if you'll be mine
    Shielded by God's right hand
    Destined in the arrangements of the star contellations
    Without physical relations we became one from the jump
    In our mental space within cyberspace
    Lyrics chased through cord lines but we have a wireless connection
    Free of preconcieved misconceptions our disceptions
    Our hearts' song skips along with the frustrated beats of the center of the universe
    Essentially found between the compounded words of verse
    Love surrounded by a crown of black music notes of 8ths nd 16ths
    Reaching new lengths and heights
    Enamored with what's purely yours mines and ours
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed , let me wrap myself deep inside this .
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Just...

    :wave:
    Quickies are known sometimes to be the one of the
    best, guess thats why I enjoy the way this unfolds.


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the peoplel we meet...

    ...the connections we make. the desire, the love, the imaginings we experience...trying to uncover...LOVE. THE UNBLEMISHED KIND.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i got one quicker

    you did yo' thing pham

    and i ain't mad at cha

    :qqb014:
     
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    Hey my sistah! This here, was really sweet. I especially like when you said
    Shielded by Gods Right hand for a union like that cannot be wrong.
    It's a beauiful thing when everything in tha universe, just lines up. My hope is that it will remain lined up, ya know?


    Beautiful Drop!
     
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    my favorite line was:

    "Lyrics chased through cord lines but we have a wireless connection"

    sounds like you're about to go digital!!! Great scribe

    Shilom
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lol well it is the 21st century NittyGrit

    I hope everything will stay lined up too apple*pie.
    Love is a beautiful thing and I am completely enamored with that man.


    Much love brotha :)

    I couldn't have said it better myself

    Thanks you coco
    Much love


    wrap on brotha lol
     
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