Black Haiku : empty

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  1. gempis

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    when everything stops
    with only the quiet left
    there's just emptiness
     
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    There can be beauty
    found in utter silences
    facing self within
     
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    silent over cast
    leave a void yet a moment
    of stilliness beauty
     
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    stopped, dead, nothingness
    the void overcomes the light
    empty, hollow life
     
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    The buck stops here...
    Chump change seldom makes the grade
    Kool Aid, taste, soooooooooooooooooo good :tongue2:
     
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    walk through the tunnel
    my legs keep carrying me
    maybe to be free
     
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    Silence is power
    there is light in the darkness
    close your eyes and see
     
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    there's peace in the dark
    Where is the truth in the light
    that shines our country?

    I must close my eyes
    to hear them whisper...false truths
    break the chains...run free...
     
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    at last emptiness
    nothingness only darkness
    time for refilling!
     
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    Refill my cup of emptiness
    as darkness will see me through
    the quietness...of my mind
     
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