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  1. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where were you when I came
    As I stepped in the place

    When I looked all around
    You weren’t found in my space

    Missing you
    Wanting to feel your embrace

    Holding you
    Loving through kissing your face

    Keeping you near
    From the first it was clear

    You’re the breath
    That I breathe and the spark that I need

    c 2002 ST
     
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    sista steel..
    hussssssss...this poemy took a little piece of my breath..

    power sis........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gurl u making me break down ........do flow on !!!
     
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    sista steele.


    maybe it's just me... but...

    i didn't think this was a "sad" peace.
    filled with melancholy longing maybe?
    ...but not sad. anyway... i enjoyed
    the read. thanks for sharing. :)

    alwayspeace,
    elayne.
     
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    SS,

    Felt!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  6. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to everyone for reading me. Elayne, you'd be right about this one. Thanks.
     
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