Black Poetry : Empty Vessel

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  1. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    Too tired to write
    meditative monologues.
    I offer you this;
    Prose from internal wars,
    Fatigue from chasing ideas.

    Much good in the world
    We can find to write about.
    I leave that to you.
    Dark, rolling clouds of thunder.
    The sky on my horizon.

    No apologies.
    Just tokens of my extremes.
    This empty vessel,
    can give only what it hears.
    The absence of sweet melodies
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel ya poet
    dis drop waz tite work
    so flo on wit nonstop


    blackluv and bp
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and sweet melodies it is ......fine tune poet
     
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    It seems to me that the vessel is more thatn full. Nice write.
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    thank you all...it is a honor anytime you can share your vision and find listeners who can identify.
     
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    thanks for the love shown for me love and im showing you some love. love the flo poet continue on please.:welldone: :welldone:
     
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