Black Poetry : Empty tear

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don’t need a point
    Unspoken word…
    Promises of
    Promises…
    What to believe
    Confused..
    Sweatin
    Head hurtin
    Tryin to breath
    But its took
    With each line
    Tryin to remember..
    Stuck…
    Don’t need a point
    Not a charity case…
    Just been thru rough waters..
    Don’t feel sorry…
    Heart of gold…
    Soul of old..
    All just been stole..
    Fear running backwards..
    Turning twistin cant go
    Don’t want to leave…
    See the rock..
    just went under..
    hidin is the best way..
    don’t have to face what
    to feel or what was felt..
    all be laid now its all
    in written on the wall…
    not a charity case…
    don’t need no point…
    a smile would of done..
    with out stealin my heart….
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved this......it was flamin'......like alwayz gurl.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now !!
    dis was a feeling i had at one point
    but over came it fast
    feelin ya scribe .....tyte
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo da read fam...
    ... :spinn: i am fine...
    just doing what i do best...
    write
     
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    let it flow head on out
     
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    thanks love ya..glad you always come and read :grouphug:
     
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    this is so very good, girl. I am feelin your lines. :)
     
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    That line right there got me. Cause I've felt that way before. I :heart: the way you put it into words.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am glad you took time to read and post..
    nice to know u felt my flow...
    i enjoy yours just the same...
    thank you:angel1:
     
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