Black Poetry : Empty Seat... (part one)

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the afternoon she always bought the fresh meat..
    fresh vegetables, picked out the best of the best...
    She didnt mind to stand in a long row to get the good stuff...
    ,as if she was going to serve Her Royal Highness..
    Ones she was home she puts on the music ....
    before she started making her art.....

    She washed the vegetables as if they were her own baby,s..
    She cut the meat as if it was a surgical operation...
    She cooked the food as if Time was a matter of life and death...
    and she baked it all as if these were the the last pieces on earth...
    She mixed all the spices as if she wants you to tast "'the fruit of life""
    The childeren who would play outside would come and take a peek trough the window...to see what was going on in there...
    They were lucky somethimes when she would give them the spoons with the whipped cream and the bolw with the leftovers of the dessert and they would dig it out between heavy wrestlings....

    When she was finished she would take a quick shower..
    and comb her hair and put on a nice simple dress,put on some incense and light up some candles ....

    and she would wait for him to come Home.......






    Every night she cooked for him a fine meal....
    prepared out of Love......



    but every night....




    he went out for "'dinner........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my dis was sweet love this flow
    pt.II mo....mo......mo....
    poet of the week on a bliss c'mon sistah shineeeeeeeeee!!!
     
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    Oh noooo no sweet rich...i made a mistake i just changed it......
    because its actually a sad poem..... i wrote And every night he went out for dinner but it is But everynight he went out for dinner....................

    funny huh lol that a little word gives another twist on the Poem
     
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    so melancholy...
    but it was still tight...
    nice scribe poet of da week
    peace
    khasm
     
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    likin' this...
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please read it again LOL....
     
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    like this
    nice flow
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks angel :heart:
     
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