Black Haiku : Empty Cylinders (Gossipers)

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  1. ki-ki2004

    ki-ki2004 Active Member MEMBER

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    Rattling away
    Gossiping most of the day
    In drama you stay.

    Prattling abreast
    Expelling confusion
    From your chest.

    Making the most noise
    Chattering like a mad man
    With bundles of keys.

    No door will yield to
    The miserable contents
    Spewed forth with venom.
     
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    ki-ki2004 Active Member MEMBER

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    I Snuck Out Through the Back Door

    Why did you hurt me?
    Did you know I trusted you?
    What hurts more? The trust?

    Why did I trust you?
    Most of all, you had hurt me.
    Not once, but now, twice.

    Trusted you again.
    It's even worse than before.
    --*snuck out the back door*
    (Just couldn't take it anymore)
     
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    deepy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    snuck out the back door
    instead of going out front
    not going to confront
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Backdoor should be shut
    confront the dishonest one
    and watch them ball up
    :flame:
     
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    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply fabulous...
    I loves ya Haiku style
    :toast:

    Many Blessings,
    Akilah :spinstar:
     
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    They talk about you?
    Then they're thinking about you
    Thoughts will consume them
     
  7. ki-ki2004

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    There thoughts will consume
    They reek of stink perfume that
    Subdues the word truth.

    I don't confront my
    Problems, but slither away
    Until they decay.

    *****Thanks y'all for writing back to my two pieces. I truly appreciate it. Truly appreciate it. Just lets me know that others are out there too feeling the same...Much, much, much love to you all.
     
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    simply on da real
    feeling ya vibe of the slam
    where they loom within

    tyte scribing in da Haiku versional twist of the reality
    love ya style