Quiet Poetry Lounge : EMOTIONZ

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Aug 21, 2006.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Emotionz river deep
    have some lost of sleep
    from da festation dat sweep
    mixing flavas make me weep
    this not what we seek
    just another mental leak
    dat have bodies squeek
    but truely we meek
    tyme we rise to our peak
    no not the thing of a freak

    Tryin to move past da pain
    that have labled us and stain
    put a load to da brain
    fryed like street caine
    yet i'm still sane
    watchin how we been name
    and who pointing to now blame
    when we all should claim
    da true black love & fame
    this what my heart now aim

    Can't get caught up in da maze
    yet feel da heat and da blaze
    but in my mental it's no faze
    just what my soul really crave
    to get us above da simple wave
    that has kept us grounded as laze
    toss us into some bambooza rage
    splashin name upon the book page
    of destruction and destroyer
    don't get me wrong i'm no lawyer
    just another strugglin brutha
    all ~ E~M~O~T~I~O~N~A~L
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unity still remains beyond our grasp, but maybe if we truly see each other, maybe someday. Great message, and your rhyme scheme was off the hook.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you watz and yes if we can only look beyond ourselves
    and see other as people and togetherness as a bond we can
    change the waves of emotions as people to move forward.......
     
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    emotional for who that is. you know you love sweeping somebody off their feet and then dropping em like its hot. well soundz like a hit and run to me naughty boy!!!!!! i like this emotional piece you've written here. and um rich got some more juicy entries to the Sinful Lust. sure to be very pleasing to the eyez. http://blogs.myspace.com//nevar112. flo on my brotha.:welldone:
     
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    thank you very much my dear Nevar
     
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    Aaaah, don't get so emotional $$RICH$$,
    One day at time and nothing happens over
    nite. Keep the faith.
    Your such a poetic poet. Nice scribe.

    Much luv
     
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    emotions is part of me can't help myself
    when i see such a stand still yet faith is what carries me through.
    thank u for the continue support and love shown 4EVERLUV
     
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    expressing what i've witness as of late this my reminder
     
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    I can't get pass da emotional state
    wondering if this my final fate
    or will a change come to late
    black love is truely great
    but can be a line like live bate
    that will seal ya mate

    Check point !!!
     
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    Deep very deep...one day at a time one hour at a time...Change will come That I do believ in...