Black Poetry : Emotions laid to Rest

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just some thoughts i wrote down......


    I've felt pain before you came along
    But with all that came you, the road seemed to long
    But I am a lot better now and hope you are too
    We both made a big mistake because our hearts
    were not true
    It killed us both to do what we had to do
    But in the end I'm glad I'm still friends with you
    I still hurt remembering what we had
    But forget the past it's just there to make me sad
    I hope you have a great life,and great fortune too
    Many,many good wishes are the ones I bless
    upon you
    So take these final words of mine and place them carefully
    There has yet to be a person as close to me
    This isn't the end,just the beginning of a new chapter
    Several years from now we'll look back with laughter
    Thanks for all the good times and great memories
    I cannot tell you how much they mean to me ..... :lips:
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Moving on with grace... I'm feefing that.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    taking it up a notch with warmth feelings
    love the mental flow of it
     
  4. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's good that you're going about a past love, closing it out with friendship, not alot of people are willing to do that.................for this i give you a :toast:
     
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    this poem was great off the mental but i sho understand
    nicely posed
     
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