Black Poetry : EMOTIONLESS

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  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awakened again
    by that constant
    tugging and pulling
    at my emotions.
    I am drained.

    I wrench
    mumbled jumbled
    words from
    my weary heart.

    I try to make some
    sense of them all,
    but I'm near collapse
    from exhaustion.

    How much longer
    will I be able
    to give so much
    of myself
    to gain so little?

    I must try to find
    inner peace to calm
    the turbulence
    churning deep
    within me.

    All I have left
    inside of me
    to fill these
    stark white pages
    are fragile pieces
    of my worn soul,
    which are, gradually,
    turning into dust.

    Even though,
    I am almost left
    emotionless,
    I must find
    strength to go on.

    I refuse to allow
    anything to stop
    my passion
    because to it,
    I have given
    my entire life.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    continue forward u will beat the battle of myth
    forth ya passion is of heart as heart is thou soul
    every piece will mend in bondment , what u give
    is not in vain.......soon the loop will free u continue on !
    stay strong ........
     
  3. Sierra

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    Hi Rich, :wave:

    Like always, the wisdom of your encouraging words uplift me and give me hope, inspiration and belief in myself!!

    I thank you for this!!

    All my love to you!!

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
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    Sierra,

    indeed.... i feel you deeply in this piece... keep ur head up, dancing w/n the passion of your life... continue to let ur soul pour forth in ur beautiful flow...

    peace & THISSSSSSS MUUUUCH LOOOOVE :)
     
  5. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey NADIA, :wave:

    Thanks so much!!

    I'll do just that, girl!!

    Got to keep my head up and keep striving!!

    You and Rich always know how to pull me out from under!!

    All my love to you!!

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
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    All I have left
    inside of me
    "to fill these
    stark white pages
    are fragile pieces
    of my worn soul,
    which are, gradually,
    turning into dust"

    This was a great piece!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is soooooooooooo beautiful...
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi angelicsage,

    My soul is smiling because of your kind words.

    :thanks:for stopping by!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  9. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Lovely,

    I am humbled by your warm thoughts!!

    Thanks for the :read:

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    wonderful Sierra feeling all the vibes...wonderful flow
    Peace :heart:
     
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